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Array ( [sid] => 181879 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is Love Really This Cruel? [time] => 2015-09-28 17:39:29 [hometext] => Wrote this when i was hurt by my ex when i caught her cheating on me. No biggie. I'm ok now. [bodytext] => "***** Love"

Oh look, here we are rolling again,

When we were just starting out as friends.

You took my heart and you tore it apart,

Look at us now, we're back at the start.

Why did u do all the things that you do,

Now we cant be together never gonna be me and you.

You don't know how much you hella hurt me girl,

I guess you played it and that was for real huh?

You still come back in my memories and haunt me,

Makes me feel better knowing you never wanted me.

Its funny,

I honestly thought 100% you were the one,

But I tried in this relationship now I'm ***** done.

I thought we were gonna be something true,

But now I'm wrong and I cant believe I miss you.

Why did you put me through all this ***** pain?

Now I'm here helplessly crying out your name.

Reminiscing about how we used to be in love,

I can't believe we were so close like Cloud 9 above.

And now we're burnt to the ground and our memories are fading,

I can't seem to get it through my head whole time you were masquerading.

Now my heartbeat is never endlessly escalating,

never fading, already to the point where its devastating.

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Is Love Really This Cruel?

Contributed by PhantoMist on Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 05:39:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

"***** Love"

Oh look, here we are rolling again,

When we were just starting out as friends.

You took my heart and you tore it apart,

Look at us now, we're back at the start.

Why did u do all the things that you do,

Now we cant be together never gonna be me and you.

You don't know how much you hella hurt me girl,

I guess you played it and that was for real huh?

You still come back in my memories and haunt me,

Makes me feel better knowing you never wanted me.

Its funny,

I honestly thought 100% you were the one,

But I tried in this relationship now I'm ***** done.

I thought we were gonna be something true,

But now I'm wrong and I cant believe I miss you.

Why did you put me through all this ***** pain?

Now I'm here helplessly crying out your name.

Reminiscing about how we used to be in love,

I can't believe we were so close like Cloud 9 above.

And now we're burnt to the ground and our memories are fading,

I can't seem to get it through my head whole time you were masquerading.

Now my heartbeat is never endlessly escalating,

never fading, already to the point where its devastating.

Copyright © PhantoMist ... [ 2015-09-28 17:39:29]
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Re: Is Love Really This Cruel? (User Rating: 1 )
by FindingMyself on Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 07:24:04 PM AEST
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This is perfectly written because this is almost how i'm feeling right about now,the man of my life and i are going through a really big rough patch my emotions are everywhere and with the way he is treating me is just tearing me up but there is nothing i can really do...Keep writing I really enjoyed your work!

Re: Is Love Really This Cruel? (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Tuesday, 29th September 2015 @ 06:37:52 AM AEST
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Similar to the last, but the instance that inspired it, I can't exactly relate to, but I will say this, I've plenty thought about it.

Remember: "******* ain't **** but *** and tricks."

Re: Is Love Really This Cruel? (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Tuesday, 29th September 2015 @ 02:05:43 PM AEST
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Good job here, Dude.

Invierno

Re: Is Love Really This Cruel? (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 08:51:30 PM AEST
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Great Piece of work!!
worded with vivd memories so you can kinda
feel what you were feeling!!
Keep writing
and sharing
forever
Peace
$tr8 $av

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