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like crumpled
paper

abstraction
defining
the hum/buzz

grey line
a trail
of decaying

flowers
that calls
to the space

of stillness
under
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a dark noisy deluge

Contributed by ming on Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 01:48:56 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

unfolding
like crumpled
paper

abstraction
defining
the hum/buzz

grey line
a trail
of decaying

flowers
that calls
to the space

of stillness
under
the mask.

Copyright © ming ... [ 2015-09-21 13:48:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: a dark noisy deluge (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 07:07:34 PM AEST
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This needs no explanation. Your write sells itself in its pure form. Conjuring images, like preview to a movie in staccato tempo. Never finishing a thought. It is a dance of vaguely connected sights and sound. No bridges to cross here. No beliefs to suspend.
Your readers will make of it what they choose.
But you are still holding the baton!
softerware

Re: a dark noisy deluge (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Monday, 21st September 2015 @ 07:07:38 PM AEST
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This needs no explanation. Your write sells itself in its pure form. Conjuring images, like preview to a movie in staccato tempo. Never finishing a thought. It is a dance of vaguely connected sights and sound. No bridges to cross here. No beliefs to suspend.
Your readers will make of it what they choose.
But you are still holding the baton!
softerware

Re: a dark noisy deluge (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Wednesday, 23rd September 2015 @ 09:13:13 PM AEST
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Ming, you continue to set a bar.

Invierno

Re: a dark noisy deluge (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 24th September 2015 @ 01:40:27 PM AEST
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Your poetry has this unique flow. I am enjoying reading them. --kara

Re: a dark noisy deluge (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 07:49:16 PM AEST
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Sorry, softerware said this needs no explantion. It does for me. Could you please tell us all the thought pattern to your poem; it is most intriguing.

Re: a dark noisy deluge (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Monday, 28th September 2015 @ 10:41:50 PM AEST
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AnotherRed,
I was told it was not allowed to chat here. Once. I sent you a pm.

ming

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