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He's our God.
Whose Lord is he?
He's our Lord.
Whose King is he?
He's our King.
So why are you complaining
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His PART IS FINISH, IT'S ALL UP TO YOU:

Contributed by richard_campbell on Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 10:33:49 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Whose God is he?
He's our God.
Whose Lord is he?
He's our Lord.
Whose King is he?
He's our King.
So why are you complaining
when he as given you everything?

Copyright © richard_campbell ... [ 2015-09-19 10:33:49]
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Re: His PART IS FINISH, IT'S ALL UP TO YOU: (User Rating: 1 )
by Beyfoxman5 on Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 03:06:24 PM AEST
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Heck yes. Amen!

Re: His PART IS FINISH, IT'S ALL UP TO YOU: (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 05:58:44 PM AEST
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"Edited for spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Sept 19, 2015"

"when he as given you everything?"

Really?

Sorry...just sayin'.

The poem? I like it. Simple, pure, pristine, devout.

Invierno

Re: His PART IS FINISH, IT'S ALL UP TO YOU: (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 07:51:44 PM AEST
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I thank Him for my life. With it, He had expectations of me, which I will never be able to live up to.

He gave me the tools; I built the temple, and everything else I have I earned for myself.

He is opportunity; and I am not the reality He hoped for, but I am all I've got, and with any luck, He understands that some experiments fail.

He promised to love us; not live our lives for us.
And while I will not blame religion for my lot in life, neither will I credit it.
I may have to apologize for that one day, but hopefully, Richard, it won't be while I am standing.
God bless us all.
softerware

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