Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:02:33 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 181807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sorrow will always be [time] => 2015-09-17 01:48:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sorrow is my greatest company
Sitting all by myself feelin' lonely
Tears that trickle down constantly
Should be of a distant memory

Always there by my side
Near, far, and when I cried
Anger in myself Is the first to unfold
Then sorrow comes, and I'm left in the cold

It comes in waves, creates a boom
Unleashes tidal waves in my heart of a tomb
Washes away all the happiness in sight
Leaves me in the dark of night
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 138 [topic] => 75 [informant] => FireStarter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

sorrow will always be

Contributed by FireStarter on Thursday, 17th September 2015 @ 01:48:47 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Sorrow is my greatest company
Sitting all by myself feelin' lonely
Tears that trickle down constantly
Should be of a distant memory

Always there by my side
Near, far, and when I cried
Anger in myself Is the first to unfold
Then sorrow comes, and I'm left in the cold

It comes in waves, creates a boom
Unleashes tidal waves in my heart of a tomb
Washes away all the happiness in sight
Leaves me in the dark of night

Copyright © FireStarter ... [ 2015-09-17 01:48:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: sorrow will always be (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 19th September 2015 @ 01:35:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Unleashes tidal waves in my heart of a tomb ...

I have been hung up on this one line...Thinking; does that make sense? Heart of a tomb? As opposed to tomb of a heart...Then I re-read the poem as a whole, and put it in perspective. Depression is a funky place. Chaotic, both empty and too full, and nonsensical all at once. So truly, where better to put a backwards thought? It sprouts poetic roots the more I chew on it...And hey; a poem has done its job if the reader lingers on the page to mull it over. If I'm being honest, that line becomes *the* poetry in this piece, so kudos to you for writing this just the way it was meant to be.
Keep writing for you, because that keeps things interesting.

~Scorp

Re: sorrow will always be (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 12:41:39 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wonderful!!! Solid writing!!1
i loved this!!
Keep writing and sharing
always!
Peace
$tr8 $av

Re: sorrow will always be (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 7th November 2015 @ 12:08:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Ahh...sorrow, such a trusted friend its been for me over the years. Sadly, Friend Sorrow is one companion I can count on. More so than unfettered happiness, for sure, for sure.

You are way to cool to be "Sitting all by myself feelin' lonely".

I hope you truly understand that the way you share; the honesty and courage to face yourself and lay it out there for others to experience, makes you unique and special. Take pride in that- it's true as pecan pie is sweet.

Invierno

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com