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Array ( [sid] => 181800 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Are Not Alone [time] => 2015-09-16 11:27:22 [hometext] => I Just Can't Get Enough of Her [bodytext] => A failure you are, that’s what you said
But in order to fail, inside you must be dead
So I disagree with your statement at hand
Lets go to the beach and talk, bury our feet in the sand

It’s hard to go it alone, that’s what your saying
But your choosing it that way, you're beautiful, you’re amazing
You are the strongest woman that I’ve had the pleasure to have known
And together we can help each other, reap everything that has been sown

You see my helping hand as dependency
Don’t see it that way, im NOT your normal tendency
I feel we were built to love, and be in relationship with another
Forever and ever like a Sons relationship to his Mother

So when you get scared, remember my name
And understand you are NEVER a complaint
Understand that you are just Human too
And accept my offer to help be the glue

You are never alone, you will never be
You are not a failure, Please just listen to me
You can feel comfort in any storm, but first you have to believe
That I deserve you, and you also deserve me

So let down your walls and let me in
You know we were meant for more, at least as friends
You make me strive to be a great Man
So let me love you, as you know I can
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You Are Not Alone

Contributed by blknwht on Wednesday, 16th September 2015 @ 11:27:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A failure you are, that’s what you said
But in order to fail, inside you must be dead
So I disagree with your statement at hand
Lets go to the beach and talk, bury our feet in the sand

It’s hard to go it alone, that’s what your saying
But your choosing it that way, you're beautiful, you’re amazing
You are the strongest woman that I’ve had the pleasure to have known
And together we can help each other, reap everything that has been sown

You see my helping hand as dependency
Don’t see it that way, im NOT your normal tendency
I feel we were built to love, and be in relationship with another
Forever and ever like a Sons relationship to his Mother

So when you get scared, remember my name
And understand you are NEVER a complaint
Understand that you are just Human too
And accept my offer to help be the glue

You are never alone, you will never be
You are not a failure, Please just listen to me
You can feel comfort in any storm, but first you have to believe
That I deserve you, and you also deserve me

So let down your walls and let me in
You know we were meant for more, at least as friends
You make me strive to be a great Man
So let me love you, as you know I can

Copyright Â© blknwht ... [ 2015-09-16 11:27:22]
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Re: You Are Not Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 16th September 2015 @ 05:29:40 PM AEST
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This is not bad for a poem with the same title of at least two songs. I like how you pour your heart into the relationship you are seeking. This is heart warming.

Re: You Are Not Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Thursday, 17th September 2015 @ 01:48:14 AM AEST
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I really like your poetry. The context of this poem is great, however, you are doing a rhyming style poetry and you seem to miss a few beats, which throws the reader off, by missing a rhyme here and there. If you reread it, you will see what I mean. Even I make mistakes at times, I am not perfect either. All in all, you also have a talent for using words and turning them into something Beautiful! Keep it up.

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