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Array ( [sid] => 1818 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unkind [time] => 2002-08-06 06:54:55 [hometext] => This is my latest work.... please file through my archive and read the rest. I have many songs and poems listed here and would like your feedback.... thanx [bodytext] => As the rain beats down on my futile head
I'm pondering ways I could end up dead
The blood that's spilled out over the years
So hard to live strong, filled with fears
All my friends they go and die
Just a blink in this world's eye
Carving knife to remove the pain
Stuck it in again and again

It's so surreal this life we share
Most of us don't even care
Lost all hope, we love to fight
Let's kill each other, make it right

So when you see me breaking down
When the media presents my frown
Know I had to let it go
This is why the blood did flow
My psycosis came from you
No cure for the hate in view
Just another man who lost his mind
In a false world - named Unkind

It's so surreal this life we share
Most of you don't even care
Lost all hope, we love to fight
Let's kill eachother, make things right

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Unkind

Contributed by Jason_Robert_Britt on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 06:54:55 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

As the rain beats down on my futile head
I'm pondering ways I could end up dead
The blood that's spilled out over the years
So hard to live strong, filled with fears
All my friends they go and die
Just a blink in this world's eye
Carving knife to remove the pain
Stuck it in again and again

It's so surreal this life we share
Most of us don't even care
Lost all hope, we love to fight
Let's kill each other, make it right

So when you see me breaking down
When the media presents my frown
Know I had to let it go
This is why the blood did flow
My psycosis came from you
No cure for the hate in view
Just another man who lost his mind
In a false world - named Unkind

It's so surreal this life we share
Most of you don't even care
Lost all hope, we love to fight
Let's kill eachother, make things right

Copyright © Jason_Robert_Britt ... [ 2002-08-06 06:54:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unkind (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 07:57:04 AM AEST
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This poem flows so well Jason and I find it profound and very moving.
Chrissie

Re: Unkind (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetie on Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 06:02:20 AM AEST
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Wow I really like this Jason!! It really flows so well and makes alot of since ya know? I can't wait to read the rest of your work you are obviously a very talented writer.
love Sweetie

Re: Unkind (User Rating: 1 )
by papajfat on Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 09:17:53 AM AEST
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not bad, i think that it would be much better if it had more of a story, defined characters

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