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Array ( [sid] => 181784 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not Understood [time] => 2015-09-13 08:22:27 [hometext] => Just Thinking [bodytext] => No one knows true plans at hand
Watching the hour glass, trickle with sand
Must get out...can not stay
Not understood, still to this day

I mean really... how could it be?
That after this long you still can't see me?
I've been right here waiting for a friend
Here I am still standing alone in the end

So now I count on me alone
Refuse to ever pick up the phone
Cause if your calling you dialed wrong
I ain't got time for that old song

A circus in my brain the stars reach high
Taking it to the next level of the ultamite high
A party going on all of the time
To everyone else it's a crime

Can't escape myself as much as I try
No one coming in, they're all passer-bys
Alone in my head I'm making plans
Plans that none of you would understand

So if this may be my last words, I hope you hear it
I begged and begged for help but you didn't see to it
Alone in my head I'll stay trapped in this rave
I feel so secure here I feel so brave

Because it's me I trust and I'll have to shout
That's after years of trusting and being shut out
I've never let myself down this is true
Tough skin I formed because of all of you

For all the unknown plans I have in my head
Everyone will remember everything they said
They will see how they played thier part
They will see how they tried to stack my cart

Crazy... I don't know maybe
But didn't you all have a chance to save me?
Couldn't you have thrown a helping hand,
To maybe try and save this forgotten man?

Doesn't matter now cause I don't care
My plans at hand is all I'm aware
I will break free from your little box
Never misunderstood again cause I'll be lost

But lost in my own head it will be great
For I always knew that it would be my fate
In your hearts I see nothing but hate
I will soon live my own life, I will not hesitate








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Not Understood

Contributed by blknwht on Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 08:22:27 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



No one knows true plans at hand
Watching the hour glass, trickle with sand
Must get out...can not stay
Not understood, still to this day

I mean really... how could it be?
That after this long you still can't see me?
I've been right here waiting for a friend
Here I am still standing alone in the end

So now I count on me alone
Refuse to ever pick up the phone
Cause if your calling you dialed wrong
I ain't got time for that old song

A circus in my brain the stars reach high
Taking it to the next level of the ultamite high
A party going on all of the time
To everyone else it's a crime

Can't escape myself as much as I try
No one coming in, they're all passer-bys
Alone in my head I'm making plans
Plans that none of you would understand

So if this may be my last words, I hope you hear it
I begged and begged for help but you didn't see to it
Alone in my head I'll stay trapped in this rave
I feel so secure here I feel so brave

Because it's me I trust and I'll have to shout
That's after years of trusting and being shut out
I've never let myself down this is true
Tough skin I formed because of all of you

For all the unknown plans I have in my head
Everyone will remember everything they said
They will see how they played thier part
They will see how they tried to stack my cart

Crazy... I don't know maybe
But didn't you all have a chance to save me?
Couldn't you have thrown a helping hand,
To maybe try and save this forgotten man?

Doesn't matter now cause I don't care
My plans at hand is all I'm aware
I will break free from your little box
Never misunderstood again cause I'll be lost

But lost in my own head it will be great
For I always knew that it would be my fate
In your hearts I see nothing but hate
I will soon live my own life, I will not hesitate












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Re: Not Understood (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 10:36:54 AM AEST
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So being lost in your own head eh?
I know that place, been there near a decade!

My favorite line is "A circus in my brain the stars reach high"

Something about that flowed smoothly, carried a tone out of my head as if I was reading it high with the stars. I liked that a lot.

All the best,
-Mark


Re: Not Understood (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 09:04:21 PM AEST
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This is similar in meaning to my poem 'I walk alone'

You sacrificed some of your poem's strength in rhyming it. I think it is cool.


Re: Not Understood (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Tuesday, 15th September 2015 @ 12:32:28 AM AEST
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This poem is swell :) I love it..especially the circus part




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