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Array ( [sid] => 181776 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgive My Love [time] => 2015-09-12 10:57:15 [hometext] => I can only hope that I didn't walk out on the best thing that ever walked into my life [bodytext] => Green and Blue are our colors of love
We fit together like two Turtle Doves
Living life as if there are no rules
Making plans for the future they think we are fools

But we both know that what we feel is so right
And I know we can continue to love, because we love so tight
Deep down in our hearts we both know it is true
I want to spend my life together, with an Oh So Beautiful You

We started building a foundation of trust
As we both feel that it is just a must
We’ve shared all of our secrets, from beginning to end
As we still know it makes us the best of friends

Like a Romance Novel we just love so deep
Being together is something we SHOULD keep
Neither of us has ever felt this way before
I’m sure we both want this feeling to last forever more



I know one day, after a day so bright
We laid on the bed as we did every night
I spoke deeper about my sickness at hand
Erika… Making you scared was NEVER my plan

You were so accepting of everything that I said
But thought we should slow down as we laid on the bed
I can’t explain what went through my mind
Old feelings of rejection that I used to feel all the time

Very scared I hopped out of the bed
I had to just leave for a few minutes, is all I said
Like my Best Friend, you blocked my way
No one has ever done that for me, you kept begging me to stay

I tried to explain why I had to go
It wasn’t your fault Erika, for you didn’t know
I hadn’t taken my meds, for the last two days
And my thought process was clouded, all in a haze

But like my Best Friend you wouldn’t let me leave
You pulled everything out of the book, everything from up your sleeve
Explaining how your mom had done you in the past… it did make me believe
Although I still acted selfishly, and decided to leave

You gave me two options at the time at hand
Erika, my decision was horrible, I wasn’t thinking like a man
As I walked out that door I did not realize what I had lost
However I realized as the door shut, OUR Love was the cost

It didn’t take me long to realize I was wrong
I didn’t even make it to the car; I felt your heart beating so strong
I ran back to your door as quick as I could
Wanted to throw my arms around you as true lovers should

But it was too late, your anger I could see
Letting me back in to you…was going to be a big catastrophe
For my actions brought alive your broken past
I understand Erika it’s a feeling you didn’t want to last

Protective, you wouldn’t open the door, kept begging me to leave
I understand right then, you couldn’t accept my apology, you felt deceived
It was never my intention Erika, I just wasn’t thinking clear
All I truly long for Erika, is for you to be near.

Out of respect for you I decided to leave
What was going on in my mind, you wouldn’t believe
For I knew I had failed you, it was never my goal
I want to love you forever, you’re such a Beautiful Soul



Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul, how I miss you so very much
I miss the sound of your voice; I miss the comforting feel of your touch
I miss the connection we shared, one neither of us has ever felt before
I miss kissing your whole body; I’ll miss it for now, but hopefully not forever more

I miss that look in your Beautiful Blue eyes, when you would look through me so deep
I miss the comfort we shared, when we talked and we both would weep
I miss the body to body contact, when we would fall asleep
I miss lying in the bed all day, each other’s hearts were ours to keep

I miss your hair in my face, when you would lay on me at night
I miss waking up to your Beautiful Self; your smile is so bright
I miss lying in the bed for hours, talking about everything in site
I miss us sticking up for each other, always using all our might

I miss eating every dinner with you, even though dinner wasn’t all that great (lol)
I miss running my fingers through your hair, while staring at your Beautiful face
I miss our little boat trip, for we were most definitely in a great place
I miss taking pictures of your Beautiful Soul, for your Beauty one hundred percent, makes my heart race

I miss making plans for our future, as our plans are surly air tight
I miss talking about the upcoming storms, for together we wouldn’t be in fright
I miss how we loved each other, for neither of us have ever loved like that before
I miss how you allowed me love you, you alone Erika, I truly adore



Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul, I’m glad to have known you this short while
Surly there’s another chance; you know we make each other smile
I admit I was wrong Erika, I knew it right away
If you’d give our love another chance, I swear I’ll always stay

We know our love is real, and never was unjust
That feeling of true love IS REAL, being together is a must!
For we both seemed to have lost, every step of every way
Together we will climb mountains! Together we will stay!

We both should view this issue, as our first big storm
And yes I know I promised, that I’d never make you mourn
Forgive my love, for my one biggest mistake
Choose to walk with me hand and hand, please don’t hesitate

For we will still walk together, through every upcoming storm
I can still fulfill my promise, and never make you mourn
The Best of Friends, yes... we still can be
For we both know that we set each other free!

If you can find in your Beautiful Heart, to believe I know I was wrong
If you can still believe, that to my ears YOU alone are my favorite song
Then let’s come back to each other once again… and live forever more
For it’s you Erika, and only you, that I have EVER truly adored

You are the love of my life, no matter your choice
I will always yearn to hear your Beautiful voice
I will always hope and believe, that you are safe and secure
I hope you will always love, for you Soul is so true and so pure

Green and Blue are our colors of love
We can’t deny it; we fit like two Turtle Doves
Please open your heart, to all that is good
Then we can walk life together, as true lovers always should

I love you Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul
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Forgive My Love

Contributed by blknwht on Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 10:57:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Green and Blue are our colors of love
We fit together like two Turtle Doves
Living life as if there are no rules
Making plans for the future they think we are fools

But we both know that what we feel is so right
And I know we can continue to love, because we love so tight
Deep down in our hearts we both know it is true
I want to spend my life together, with an Oh So Beautiful You

We started building a foundation of trust
As we both feel that it is just a must
We’ve shared all of our secrets, from beginning to end
As we still know it makes us the best of friends

Like a Romance Novel we just love so deep
Being together is something we SHOULD keep
Neither of us has ever felt this way before
I’m sure we both want this feeling to last forever more



I know one day, after a day so bright
We laid on the bed as we did every night
I spoke deeper about my sickness at hand
Erika… Making you scared was NEVER my plan

You were so accepting of everything that I said
But thought we should slow down as we laid on the bed
I can’t explain what went through my mind
Old feelings of rejection that I used to feel all the time

Very scared I hopped out of the bed
I had to just leave for a few minutes, is all I said
Like my Best Friend, you blocked my way
No one has ever done that for me, you kept begging me to stay

I tried to explain why I had to go
It wasn’t your fault Erika, for you didn’t know
I hadn’t taken my meds, for the last two days
And my thought process was clouded, all in a haze

But like my Best Friend you wouldn’t let me leave
You pulled everything out of the book, everything from up your sleeve
Explaining how your mom had done you in the past… it did make me believe
Although I still acted selfishly, and decided to leave

You gave me two options at the time at hand
Erika, my decision was horrible, I wasn’t thinking like a man
As I walked out that door I did not realize what I had lost
However I realized as the door shut, OUR Love was the cost

It didn’t take me long to realize I was wrong
I didn’t even make it to the car; I felt your heart beating so strong
I ran back to your door as quick as I could
Wanted to throw my arms around you as true lovers should

But it was too late, your anger I could see
Letting me back in to you…was going to be a big catastrophe
For my actions brought alive your broken past
I understand Erika it’s a feeling you didn’t want to last

Protective, you wouldn’t open the door, kept begging me to leave
I understand right then, you couldn’t accept my apology, you felt deceived
It was never my intention Erika, I just wasn’t thinking clear
All I truly long for Erika, is for you to be near.

Out of respect for you I decided to leave
What was going on in my mind, you wouldn’t believe
For I knew I had failed you, it was never my goal
I want to love you forever, you’re such a Beautiful Soul



Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul, how I miss you so very much
I miss the sound of your voice; I miss the comforting feel of your touch
I miss the connection we shared, one neither of us has ever felt before
I miss kissing your whole body; I’ll miss it for now, but hopefully not forever more

I miss that look in your Beautiful Blue eyes, when you would look through me so deep
I miss the comfort we shared, when we talked and we both would weep
I miss the body to body contact, when we would fall asleep
I miss lying in the bed all day, each other’s hearts were ours to keep

I miss your hair in my face, when you would lay on me at night
I miss waking up to your Beautiful Self; your smile is so bright
I miss lying in the bed for hours, talking about everything in site
I miss us sticking up for each other, always using all our might

I miss eating every dinner with you, even though dinner wasn’t all that great (lol)
I miss running my fingers through your hair, while staring at your Beautiful face
I miss our little boat trip, for we were most definitely in a great place
I miss taking pictures of your Beautiful Soul, for your Beauty one hundred percent, makes my heart race

I miss making plans for our future, as our plans are surly air tight
I miss talking about the upcoming storms, for together we wouldn’t be in fright
I miss how we loved each other, for neither of us have ever loved like that before
I miss how you allowed me love you, you alone Erika, I truly adore



Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul, I’m glad to have known you this short while
Surly there’s another chance; you know we make each other smile
I admit I was wrong Erika, I knew it right away
If you’d give our love another chance, I swear I’ll always stay

We know our love is real, and never was unjust
That feeling of true love IS REAL, being together is a must!
For we both seemed to have lost, every step of every way
Together we will climb mountains! Together we will stay!

We both should view this issue, as our first big storm
And yes I know I promised, that I’d never make you mourn
Forgive my love, for my one biggest mistake
Choose to walk with me hand and hand, please don’t hesitate

For we will still walk together, through every upcoming storm
I can still fulfill my promise, and never make you mourn
The Best of Friends, yes... we still can be
For we both know that we set each other free!

If you can find in your Beautiful Heart, to believe I know I was wrong
If you can still believe, that to my ears YOU alone are my favorite song
Then let’s come back to each other once again… and live forever more
For it’s you Erika, and only you, that I have EVER truly adored

You are the love of my life, no matter your choice
I will always yearn to hear your Beautiful voice
I will always hope and believe, that you are safe and secure
I hope you will always love, for you Soul is so true and so pure

Green and Blue are our colors of love
We can’t deny it; we fit like two Turtle Doves
Please open your heart, to all that is good
Then we can walk life together, as true lovers always should

I love you Erika, Oh Beautiful Soul




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Re: Forgive My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 03:21:22 PM AEST
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Woah, a novel of love. lol
Impressive, in it I can offer tiny bits of suggestion, like slight alterations to words for a smoother flow of the words in terms of the syllables. It's really long, so I can't go back and find any in particular right this moment.

I feel I've been where you are in this respect, with someone of my interest. For the fear of the unknown, the fear of the risk of causing pain of the heart by letting compassion slip, the fear of losing connection by difference in identity, these things can be rough.

Your issue, I have no clue, but the fear is what you should fear in this respect.

I hope the best for you. :)


Re: Forgive My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 03:46:50 PM AEST
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I am reminded of lost love here; so touching and sad, but in a good way. You know the cliche "if you love someone set them free..." We'll have to see what happens, but great writing here. Pure emotion and beauty at its finest. Take care and God bless,

Deidra


Re: Forgive My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 07:53:06 PM AEST
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Firstly this is an epically long poem. I think you get your point across in many ways and with lots of repetition but not quite like a song rather like a pouring of the heart. I like this somewhat about your poem.


Re: Forgive My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th September 2015 @ 09:07:46 PM AEST
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beautiful:)

hugs n' love nessa




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