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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Rebirth
[time] => 2015-09-04 11:10:07
[hometext] => So a user on YPDC maybe a year ago, asked me to give him tips, because he wanted a ''no.1 poem''. Then he asked to duo a poem. I thought of taking time to each do two stanzas to make a poem like a rap duo. He never responded, so I'm now finishing it. :)
[bodytext] => (The first two stanzas were done ahead of time, so the flow might be semi-similar, but I suppose this will be spoken word/rap no.5 I think.) I set tones with choking voices Demonstrate my weak and feeble mind Illustrate efforts for right choices As I slowly succumb to damnation in kind I lack the right energy and skills To escape my idiotic ignorant prisons But I'll begin a sequence of commencing thrills To shine through your oculus with profound visions You bring the fire, and I'll bring the rain I'll downpour and extinguish every ounce of hate I drop from the sky like judgment held on high While ivory towers wither crumble and collide The end hasn't been seen yet, but trust that it's glorious! The stone and structure of the unjust minority Collapsing into an airborne dirt cacophony Leaving nothing but a pool of love and empathy Climbing from the ashes, and even from the dust, An invariable escape from the great combust With newfound courage to rebuild the bridge To mitigate poison given to the heretics Wait 'til the kings and their eyes have ceased Making constant efforts to keep freedom seized Wait 'til the blind and meek have seen Every futile attempt to hide their destiny [Probably the longest time I've ever spent editing, but I just can't keep going with it. Too much. :( ] [comments] => 2 [counter] => 120 [topic] => 73 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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