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Array ( [sid] => 181675 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mirrors [time] => 2015-08-28 19:00:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A reflection of what we hope for,
One that feels like a door,
A feeling that we must roar,
A future that will never be in store.

A reflection of our upcoming,
One that keeps running,
A past that keeps mumbling,
A wish that keeps struggling.

A reflection of what went wrong,
Feelings that weren’t strong,
A bridge that was too long,
No one came to the dong.

A reflection of our sadness,
When we’re filled with madness,
A substitute for failing gladness,
All lit but it’s all blackness.

A reflection that we adulate,
With no need to calibrate,
And life will castigate,
In us we fabricate.

A reflection that will crack,
A future all in black,
A loss of track,
Payment for the choice to slack.

A reflection that leaves a gap,
Feelings that will always trap,
Angry that you will never snap,
A mirror that gave the slap. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 43 [informant] => AmiasDavies [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Mirrors

Contributed by AmiasDavies on Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 07:00:39 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A reflection of what we hope for,
One that feels like a door,
A feeling that we must roar,
A future that will never be in store.

A reflection of our upcoming,
One that keeps running,
A past that keeps mumbling,
A wish that keeps struggling.

A reflection of what went wrong,
Feelings that weren’t strong,
A bridge that was too long,
No one came to the dong.

A reflection of our sadness,
When we’re filled with madness,
A substitute for failing gladness,
All lit but it’s all blackness.

A reflection that we adulate,
With no need to calibrate,
And life will castigate,
In us we fabricate.

A reflection that will crack,
A future all in black,
A loss of track,
Payment for the choice to slack.

A reflection that leaves a gap,
Feelings that will always trap,
Angry that you will never snap,
A mirror that gave the slap.

Copyright Â© AmiasDavies ... [ 2015-08-28 19:00:39]
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Re: Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 02:47:39 AM AEST
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I like your poem for it is a reflection of your style and intensity

Re: Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Monday, 31st August 2015 @ 02:04:12 AM AEST
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I really like any poetry on mirrors or reflections but yours takes the cake ^~^ good job

Re: Mirrors (User Rating: 1 )
by CandyAnn on Monday, 31st August 2015 @ 05:37:21 PM AEST
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Nice work.

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