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Array ( [sid] => 181673 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => War [time] => 2015-08-28 07:22:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The world is cursed,
Everyone wishes for the worst,
For war we have a thirst,
And we can’t wait to burst,
Everyone wishing that they’re first,
It’s as if the world will never be nursed,
And this isn’t rehearsed,
It just immersed,
One word and we’re all DISPERSED,
It should be reversed,
The reasons are all submersed,
It’s like we’re all coerced,
And they say they’re versed.

One action leads to another,
One death leads the brother,
And all puppets by the cry of the mother,
Those shouts make us smother,
Which leads us souther.

One’s pain will never be forgiving,
But it’s for us, the living,
We’re the ones who should be giving,
For there is a COST OF living,
We should be reliving,
And stop the misgiving,
And make it all thanksgiving. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 57 [informant] => AmiasDavies [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => war )

War

Contributed by AmiasDavies on Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 07:22:37 AM in AEST
Topic: war

The world is cursed,
Everyone wishes for the worst,
For war we have a thirst,
And we can’t wait to burst,
Everyone wishing that they’re first,
It’s as if the world will never be nursed,
And this isn’t rehearsed,
It just immersed,
One word and we’re all DISPERSED,
It should be reversed,
The reasons are all submersed,
It’s like we’re all coerced,
And they say they’re versed.

One action leads to another,
One death leads the brother,
And all puppets by the cry of the mother,
Those shouts make us smother,
Which leads us souther.

One’s pain will never be forgiving,
But it’s for us, the living,
We’re the ones who should be giving,
For there is a COST OF living,
We should be reliving,
And stop the misgiving,
And make it all thanksgiving.

Copyright Â© AmiasDavies ... [ 2015-08-28 07:22:37]
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Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 11:40:34 AM AEST
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Tied my tongue reading this! Holy cow Batman..such rhyme sustained!

Like your message; like your delivery; and never knew that so many words ended with "ersed".

An entertaining sing-song to start the week!
softerware

Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 28th August 2015 @ 03:37:51 PM AEST
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This is a very positive and refreshing write. Each stanza has its own message and rhyme

Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 29th August 2015 @ 09:56:42 AM AEST
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Great poem.
I think you put more rhymes in this than there is time.
Well done indeed!

James

Re: War (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th August 2015 @ 01:19:34 AM AEST
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A balance perhaps
If there was a natural state
in the balance
there would be no need for
the idea of war
For the all of everyone
caught up in any war ever recorded
or perhaps unrecorded enough
The infinitesimals have no say...

Gratitude for those who understand
this can never be said enough

Great piece!

Peace!

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