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Array ( [sid] => 181651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Guidance of Angels [time] => 2015-08-24 07:04:33 [hometext] => A poem of Romantic ideology it would so seem. [bodytext] => She speaks the tongue
Of myth and cherub
Walking on pedestals,
Climbing ever higher
She takes my hand,
And leads the way
Guiding me,
To a better day

To see the world,
In crayon textures
Escape the world
Of black and white
One needs climb
From the depths
A journey must be made,
From the Everglades

Stand atop the cathedral,
Look down upon the town,
And you will find sights,
Without equal
After letting go of human hands,
And embracing an idyllic world [comments] => 6 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The Guidance of Angels

Contributed by xHeathenx on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 07:04:33 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

She speaks the tongue
Of myth and cherub
Walking on pedestals,
Climbing ever higher
She takes my hand,
And leads the way
Guiding me,
To a better day

To see the world,
In crayon textures
Escape the world
Of black and white
One needs climb
From the depths
A journey must be made,
From the Everglades

Stand atop the cathedral,
Look down upon the town,
And you will find sights,
Without equal
After letting go of human hands,
And embracing an idyllic world

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2015-08-24 07:04:33]
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Re: The Guidance of Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmy79 on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 11:16:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful😀

Re: The Guidance of Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Boomking on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 01:40:03 PM AEST
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I'd hope angels descend to come to us as human angels!

Re: The Guidance of Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 02:50:44 PM AEST
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You deftly show your skill as a poet again and again. I am amazed by this piece. Its passionate yet pure. You inspire writers like me to try.

Re: The Guidance of Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Tuesday, 25th August 2015 @ 06:27:28 AM AEST
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Nice to see your latest, you heathen you. A philo-pizza-losopher...you don't find them every day. I'll have to reread this a few times to get beneath the wrapping.

I miss our deeper correspondence. Did I prove to blunt an edge to slice the conversational pie? pm me, my friend.

Invierno

Re: The Guidance of Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 25th August 2015 @ 09:56:55 AM AEST
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I can't always decipher your true intentions within your clever poetry, but I swear I detect sarcasm and a general mockery of rose-coloured glasses and the like. I could be way off, and most likely am, but forgive my smirks and cheering along as I pretend otherwise. Hehe ;)
Now I'm giggling on a Tuesday, before noon- diabolical.

Heathen indeed!

~Scorp

Re: The Guidance of Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th August 2015 @ 08:28:03 PM AEST
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Now that Scorp mentions it, it does seems sort of sarcastic or facetious. I've read it about four times now and yeah. I'll chip away at their pedestal I built for them until I can chip no further. But then I can read it again and simply get lost in beauty. I think it's one of those types of poems that could have a few layers of meaning. Nicely played. Thanks, Tim

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