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I saw the devil
Contributed by
shelby
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Friday, 21st August 2015 @ 09:45:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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~I saw the devil~
I watched you change before my eyes,
Twisted up in your demented mind.
I felt the evil in the air
I saw the devil in your cold hard stare.
Never in my wildest dreams
would I think I'd ever see
a she ***** arrive in overdrive
twisted with the devils guise
shake the earth beneath my feet.
Words and twisted mind unfurled
pounding fists and hatefilled glares
no word no reason to comprehend
I watched the devil end a friend.
Or maybe that was in fact the lie.
Im through, I am forever done.
This time it cannot be undone.
The thread and the tie's that bind
no heart felt empathy for you
Im blind, heart strings I took a sharp knife to
I severed you I severed you,
Tossed the ashes to the wind
you wont be near me again, again.
I saw the devil and it was you
tis sadly true sadly true.
Your actions and everything you do
he has caught you and melted in your stone cold soul.
Get behind me devil, I cast you to the dust.
8-7-2015
~Michelle~ My name meaning is =of God
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Re: I saw the devil
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by Archie on
Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 12:30:27 AM AEST
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| Your piece reminds me of the story of Legion , the one who could not be chained any longer. Some meds or the lack of them can make people do crazy things. I like the style of your poem and your rhyming scheme. |
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Re: I saw the devil
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2015 @ 11:19:59 AM AEST
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| A harsh episode, and you are rightly devasted and in no mood for forgiving. Seems to me that your 'best' friend is in an extremely dark place a the moment. |
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Re: I saw the devil
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 26th August 2015 @ 01:32:09 AM AEST
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when things are rough is when we find out who's with or
against us, you are better off without this person,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I saw the devil
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 1st November 2015 @ 06:04:04 PM AEST
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This explains to my why it is so hard to trust people.
Thanks for your comments on my last poem.
Best,
Fox |
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