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Can you help me?
Contributed by
FireStarter
on
Tuesday, 18th August 2015 @ 04:33:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Will anybody, somebody
help me..
help me..
find out who I am?
Can anybody, somebody
be kind enough
to lend a helping hand?
My body and mind were stripped,
stripped bare
Is there anybody, somebody
out there?
Copyright ©
FireStarter
... [
2015-08-18 16:33:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Can you help me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Wednesday, 19th August 2015 @ 05:27:12 AM AEST (User
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A poignant and plaintive request, nicely structured.
S. |
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Re: Can you help me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th August 2015 @ 10:27:15 AM AEST (User
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Wow, I don't know if this is real or fiction but if it's fiction, you certainly brought it to life with realism & if real, I hope someone helped you.
Keepa writin'!
Tim |
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Re: Can you help me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 04:02:43 AM AEST (User
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Simple words with a greater and maybe dual meaning. I can relate to this. |
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Re: Can you help me?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 01:19:14 AM AEST (User
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simply................powerful!
hugs n' love nessa
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