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Crunchy dawn and stolen air;
beauty I would give my breath to,
crusty eyes to leave droppings
on the porch.
Pinks so pink pink is shamed , stealing
such a precious colored name;
so soft, the sun yet not awake,
rising with me in this moment. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 27 [informant] => Invierno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Crunchy Dawn

Contributed by Invierno on Sunday, 16th August 2015 @ 04:26:44 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Crunchy dawn and stolen air;
beauty I would give my breath to,
crusty eyes to leave droppings
on the porch.
Pinks so pink pink is shamed , stealing
such a precious colored name;
so soft, the sun yet not awake,
rising with me in this moment.

Copyright © Invierno ... [ 2015-08-16 16:26:44]
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Re: Crunchy Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th August 2015 @ 07:33:56 PM AEST
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Re: Crunchy Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 17th August 2015 @ 05:25:18 AM AEST
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After I read it twice I got it.
Cool write indeed.

James

Re: Crunchy Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 02:46:02 PM AEST
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this made me think of a sunrise. this is simply beautiful and amazing!

Kara aka irisblue

Re: Crunchy Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 22nd August 2015 @ 09:45:46 PM AEST
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What a perfect selection of words to describe a crispy dawning not yet quite born. "Pinks so pink pink is shamed." In the chill silence of the night cocooning into a butterfly, we breathe the frozen air into our souls to write another day on the black slate sky.
Crunchy dawn and stolen air..behold the night escaping before the thunder of morning!
I cannot better praise your customary eloquence.
You are always a joy to journey with!
softerware

Re: Crunchy Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Sunday, 23rd August 2015 @ 03:09:14 AM AEST
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Loved the title, and the rest didn't disappoint either.
Ironically I was reading this while eating my crunchy cornflakes.
Just goes to show, words used in the right hands can really make us sit up and take notice.

Steve

Re: Crunchy Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 03:35:02 AM AEST
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I don't see the sunrise but your poem is great just the same.

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