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Array ( [sid] => 18159 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No real title [time] => 2003-05-28 17:35:00 [hometext] => My life is absolutely unbelievable, how did I get involved with these people? It is really brief and "choppy", (i apologize)


Most of the names have been changed for good reason... [bodytext] => Shayla was at her boyfriends house
They were going to a party that night
But they left her alone to get some drinks
She stepped into the closet and took her own life

This jerk would go out and beat up anyone
And he tormented me in my car one night
Don't ask me why I gave him that ride I regret it
Now he's killed someone's father in a fight

Lisa was a very troubled girl
Many problems in her head
When she got arrested that night
They found her hanging form the top bunk

We went to BC on vacation
When my dad started having pain
Diagnosed on vaction with cancer
He will never be the same

Jared was just on his way home
When the truck rolled onto it's top
A night out with the boys was all it was
His death could not be stopped

Jason's friends set him up one night
He unknowingly waited for his enemies
To literally stab him in the back and more
Lucky he got out of intensive care

Then most recently Tyler hit Daniel
The blod clots hemmoraged in his brain
The life support didn't need to be ended
He passed on his own, Tyler will never be the same

(Though I know it seems unfair
That Tyler is the one I pity
But no one reading this knows him like I do)
And yes I send Tyler's family nothing but my deepest sympathy [comments] => 2 [counter] => 351 [topic] => 31 [informant] => SeXyDrAgOn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
No real title

Contributed by SeXyDrAgOn on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Shayla was at her boyfriends house
They were going to a party that night
But they left her alone to get some drinks
She stepped into the closet and took her own life

This jerk would go out and beat up anyone
And he tormented me in my car one night
Don't ask me why I gave him that ride I regret it
Now he's killed someone's father in a fight

Lisa was a very troubled girl
Many problems in her head
When she got arrested that night
They found her hanging form the top bunk

We went to BC on vacation
When my dad started having pain
Diagnosed on vaction with cancer
He will never be the same

Jared was just on his way home
When the truck rolled onto it's top
A night out with the boys was all it was
His death could not be stopped

Jason's friends set him up one night
He unknowingly waited for his enemies
To literally stab him in the back and more
Lucky he got out of intensive care

Then most recently Tyler hit Daniel
The blod clots hemmoraged in his brain
The life support didn't need to be ended
He passed on his own, Tyler will never be the same

(Though I know it seems unfair
That Tyler is the one I pity
But no one reading this knows him like I do)
And yes I send Tyler's family nothing but my deepest sympathy




Copyright © SeXyDrAgOn ... [ 2003-05-28 17:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: No real title (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 12:59:39 AM AEST
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WOW!!! Sounds like you have been having the same troubles I have been. I was just asking myself the same question how did I get to know these people??? I hope things are better for you and yours.
Michelle


Re: No real title (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 12:58:49 AM AEST
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holy smokes girl!! That is a screwed up life. I couldn't deal with all that death and near death...... and suicide.... How DID you get to know these people?

Anyway, I give you cudo's for managing to live this life, and my best wishes that life gets better for you.

Good write.

*J*




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