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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Two Lines
[time] => 2003-05-28 15:05:00
[hometext] => This... is to my wonderous friend. Damara. This is my second poem to you. "You know... I miss you...."
[bodytext] => "You know.... I miss you....."
"I miss you too..."
Two lines, that's all
It took to make tears fall.
I didn't know what I lost,
I did not know the cost,
That it would take to move away.
That it'd be the friendship to pay.
All the blackness that was brought on,
Is only here because your gone.
It created the emptiness inside,
Now I don't have to run and hide.
When I moved, I lost alot,
And in the newness I forgot,
To replace all those things I left behind,
With new things that I find.
"You know.... I miss you..."
"I miss you too...."
All I read in these two lines
Is all in my world that brightly shines.
To my friend and companion,
My sorrow fills a canyon.
I miss you with my whole heart,
And I wish we never had to part.
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 256
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[informant] => yellow_sundragon
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[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => FriendshipPoetry
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Two Lines
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yellow_sundragon
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Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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"You know.... I miss you....."
"I miss you too..."
Two lines, that's all
It took to make tears fall.
I didn't know what I lost,
I did not know the cost,
That it would take to move away.
That it'd be the friendship to pay.
All the blackness that was brought on,
Is only here because your gone.
It created the emptiness inside,
Now I don't have to run and hide.
When I moved, I lost alot,
And in the newness I forgot,
To replace all those things I left behind,
With new things that I find.
"You know.... I miss you..."
"I miss you too...."
All I read in these two lines
Is all in my world that brightly shines.
To my friend and companion,
My sorrow fills a canyon.
I miss you with my whole heart,
And I wish we never had to part.
Copyright ©
yellow_sundragon
... [
2003-05-28 15:05:00]
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Re: Two Lines
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:45:11 PM AEST
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| oh...i know how you feel...very good... |
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Re: Two Lines
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by Ember on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:47:58 PM AEST
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| hey i know how you feel here my friend moved also. he still lives in the same town but we hardly talk ne more and it hurts to loose some1 that u though would be there forever and never leave or change |
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Re: Two Lines
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 08:22:08 PM AEST
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beautiful,,it is sometimes devastating when a friend moves away,, the distance brings such lonliness
Shari |
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Re: Two Lines
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:55:42 PM AEST
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| I love this poem its great, its usually me thats moving away from my friends, so i dont usually get close, but now we've stayed long enough and i dont know what i'd do without my friends now |
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Re: Two Lines
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 05:38:55 AM AEST
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Oh my god... you just made me cry!!! You bumhole! You're too damn sweet to me. What'd I ever do that was so great, huh? I'm just stupid, little old me. But you know what? We may be apart physically, but we never lost the friendship. I mean, look at this! It's right here in this poem and in this comment! Trust me when I say I know how much distance sucks and that it's just not the same, but it's not like we'll never see each other again. Neither of us will let that happen. You know that I love you and cherish your friendship. You're one of the most wonderful people I've ever met, and I hated to see you go. You always understood me even when no one else could. I could go on and on like this, but my comment would end up taking up a whole page, so I'll stop here. Just remember that I love you and we'll see each other soon enough, I'm sure. Blessed be my forever friend,
~ Dee |
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Re: Two Lines
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by Chuckx on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:56:45 PM AEST
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I just read your poem and the comment from Moonlitangel and I wanted to cry. I am in love with honesty and your poem sobs with an honest feeling.
Chuckx. |
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Re: Two Lines
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 09:48:31 PM AEST
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| awww! this is so sweet and caring! but so sad! awww, your both such lovely people! i wish i could sent you a ticket to visit her.... ~hugs n' love to you both!! |
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Re: Two Lines
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 06:20:55 PM AEST
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I'm the bumhole?? You just made ME cry! and I cried as I WROTE the poem!! So I got two cries!
I love you D, your a special person. I miss you lots... hopefully I'll see you this august... when I hopefully move back... lol...
*J* |
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Re: Two Lines
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by New_York_Chick on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 06:23:15 PM AEST
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| though it's a sad poem i really liked it |
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