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Array ( [sid] => 181528 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Deal [time] => 2015-08-05 19:38:22 [hometext] => What Can I Say.... [bodytext] => All alone in this world
That's just how I feel
A joke between God and Satan
I must of been the deal

To mess with my life
It must not of been tough
To give and take a Wife
Makes it much more rough

To give and take a Son
It was a horrible joke
Leaving me breathless
Feeling like I had choked

Sending me off
When I was only sixteen
Into a world of unknown
Is horribly unclean

Stabbing at my life
Like it's some kinda game
Not using a knife
I find kinda lame

Moving me all around
Since the day that I was born
Makes you both ugly clowns
Even the one without the horns

I hope you had your fun
Having your way with me
I must say that I'm done
Please bury me in the sea

Because I can't take this life no more
All your jokes and all your games
It would be better to throw me overboard
Let me drown in all my shame

Or maybe have me on my knees
With my head facing the ground
One gun and one bullet please
Then... maybe Ill be found

Although I know how that story goes
And I know I won't be freed
That's just the way my life flows
All I can do is continue to bleed [comments] => 2 [counter] => 413 [topic] => 36 [informant] => blknwht [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Deal

Contributed by blknwht on Wednesday, 5th August 2015 @ 07:38:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

All alone in this world
That's just how I feel
A joke between God and Satan
I must of been the deal

To mess with my life
It must not of been tough
To give and take a Wife
Makes it much more rough

To give and take a Son
It was a horrible joke
Leaving me breathless
Feeling like I had choked

Sending me off
When I was only sixteen
Into a world of unknown
Is horribly unclean

Stabbing at my life
Like it's some kinda game
Not using a knife
I find kinda lame

Moving me all around
Since the day that I was born
Makes you both ugly clowns
Even the one without the horns

I hope you had your fun
Having your way with me
I must say that I'm done
Please bury me in the sea

Because I can't take this life no more
All your jokes and all your games
It would be better to throw me overboard
Let me drown in all my shame

Or maybe have me on my knees
With my head facing the ground
One gun and one bullet please
Then... maybe Ill be found

Although I know how that story goes
And I know I won't be freed
That's just the way my life flows
All I can do is continue to bleed

Copyright © blknwht ... [ 2015-08-05 19:38:22]
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Re: The Deal (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Wednesday, 5th August 2015 @ 09:12:20 PM AEST
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They say that God only gives us what we can handle, but I'd say that the suicide rate argues against it. The problem is that once you make that decision, there is no exit strategy. No way to take it back.

You've expressed yourself very well here. I can definitely feel your pain and despair, but hope springs eternal. Don't try to change it all at once. Just 2 degrees of change at a time and before you know it, you'll be 180 degrees from where you are now.

Re: The Deal (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 01:21:05 AM AEST
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I can feel your pain very clear

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