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Array ( [sid] => 181514 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Must be a Dream [time] => 2015-08-02 18:22:56 [hometext] => What I wouldn't do to find you again [bodytext] => Running through the darkness not a soul in site
I keep running and running, pushing with all my might
Where are you now? Why aren't you here?
Not by my side is my new fear

I keep searching and searching, but your nowhere to find
I can't seem to grasp what’s going on in my mind
You seem to be missing, where did you go?
Please come back to me, so the pain can leave me forever more.

Running through the darkness, not a soul in site
"God can you please help me? I'm looking for my wife"
A dark figure appeared, with red in his eyes
Said "God will not help you, you are now mine."

He led me to a place all painted in red
Seeing the fiery flames made me think like I was dead
As I turned to the dark figure what did I see?
A seven headed beast staring back at me

I dropped to my knees, I begged, I cried
I screamed at the top of my lungs "PLEASE GIVE ME MY WIFE"
With a thunderous voice, and hate in his eyes
He said unto me " You have no wife"

"This can't be true" I said
“It must be a Dream
Someone wake me up
So i don't have to scream”

The seven headed beast looked back upon me and said
"It does no good to scream, because you are now dead
And you shall stay this way forever more
Locked inside this dream, I've closed the door."

Running through the darkness not a soul in site
I keep running and running, wishing I still had my wife
Where are you now? Why aren't you here?
Not by my side is my new fear [comments] => 5 [counter] => 297 [topic] => 22 [informant] => blknwht [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Must be a Dream

Contributed by blknwht on Sunday, 2nd August 2015 @ 06:22:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Running through the darkness not a soul in site
I keep running and running, pushing with all my might
Where are you now? Why aren't you here?
Not by my side is my new fear

I keep searching and searching, but your nowhere to find
I can't seem to grasp what’s going on in my mind
You seem to be missing, where did you go?
Please come back to me, so the pain can leave me forever more.

Running through the darkness, not a soul in site
"God can you please help me? I'm looking for my wife"
A dark figure appeared, with red in his eyes
Said "God will not help you, you are now mine."

He led me to a place all painted in red
Seeing the fiery flames made me think like I was dead
As I turned to the dark figure what did I see?
A seven headed beast staring back at me

I dropped to my knees, I begged, I cried
I screamed at the top of my lungs "PLEASE GIVE ME MY WIFE"
With a thunderous voice, and hate in his eyes
He said unto me " You have no wife"

"This can't be true" I said
“It must be a Dream
Someone wake me up
So i don't have to scream”

The seven headed beast looked back upon me and said
"It does no good to scream, because you are now dead
And you shall stay this way forever more
Locked inside this dream, I've closed the door."

Running through the darkness not a soul in site
I keep running and running, wishing I still had my wife
Where are you now? Why aren't you here?
Not by my side is my new fear




Copyright © blknwht ... [ 2015-08-02 18:22:56]
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Re: Must be a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Sunday, 2nd August 2015 @ 08:54:15 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B


Re: Must be a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 06:50:25 AM AEST
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Great write indeed.
I wrote something along these lines
" Citadel Of Hell"
Back to you. Really unique and well done

James


Re: Must be a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ScorpionFire88 on Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 08:15:02 AM AEST
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Wow, this gave me chills, and bright tears to my eyes.

Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

- Anna


Re: Must be a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 12:19:51 PM AEST
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Wow, that was pretty damn cool!

Thanks for a great read and  photo 1036153111_gif.gif to YPDC.

Tim





Re: Must be a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 09:05:40 PM AEST
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Very nice write. And while it hurts now, pain does eventually fade.




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