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Array ( [sid] => 181512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Abby Is Not Ok [time] => 2015-08-02 14:37:16 [hometext] => The first part of this song is a poem written by my daughter. She is a child with Downs syndrome with a developmental age of seven or eight. The song can be found at reverbnation.com under Arkay Oghe. I LOVE Abby. [bodytext] => March 13, 2015
Friday
9:04 p.m.

Abby Is Not Ok
written by: Abigail Alise Olson
and Daddy

"Abby is not ok...
save Abby...
Abby is not here...
She say is not ok...

Sit here...
do nothing...
And is not
saved...

But Daddy
save Abby,
Once
and for all...

Say...but Abby
not to say,
'Said
Daddy...'
I know...
ask Mom..."

[music:]

Abby is not ok...
will somebody please
help me save Abby...
Abby...she is not here...
she say,
she is not okay...

She sits here,
doin' nothing...
And she; still,
she is not saved...

But Abby still hopes,
Daddy will save Abby,
Once
and for all...

Say...but Abby was told
not to say,
"Said
Daddy..."
I know...I know...I know;
"I know, ask Mom..."


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Abby Is Not Ok

Contributed by enigma on Sunday, 2nd August 2015 @ 02:37:16 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



March 13, 2015
Friday
9:04 p.m.

Abby Is Not Ok
written by: Abigail Alise Olson
and Daddy

"Abby is not ok...
save Abby...
Abby is not here...
She say is not ok...

Sit here...
do nothing...
And is not
saved...

But Daddy
save Abby,
Once
and for all...

Say...but Abby
not to say,
'Said
Daddy...'
I know...
ask Mom..."

[music:]

Abby is not ok...
will somebody please
help me save Abby...
Abby...she is not here...
she say,
she is not okay...

She sits here,
doin' nothing...
And she; still,
she is not saved...

But Abby still hopes,
Daddy will save Abby,
Once
and for all...

Say...but Abby was told
not to say,
"Said
Daddy..."
I know...I know...I know;
"I know, ask Mom..."






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Re: Abby Is Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Sunday, 2nd August 2015 @ 04:27:16 PM AEST
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My heart goes out to Abby and your family. She has a special father, so, while it is what it is, she has the comfort of knowing she is loved....not all children experience that, so she is lucky in ways other kids aren't.

Bless all of you.

Invierno


Re: Abby Is Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Sunday, 2nd August 2015 @ 08:41:26 PM AEST
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You guys did a great job. It's beautiful.

Hannah B


Re: Abby Is Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by ScorpionFire88 on Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 08:18:53 AM AEST
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This one broke my heart. Beautiful poem. Lots of love to Abby.

- Anna


Re: Abby Is Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 01:40:45 AM AEST
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This is so sad


Re: Abby Is Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 21st August 2015 @ 06:44:42 PM AEST
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Abby will be ok with all the love and support that is clearly manifested by you here.
Life can deal a cruel blow, how we take that blow and deflect it is the key.
Very moving

Steve


Re: Abby Is Not Ok (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 24th August 2015 @ 09:07:28 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. the third eldest boy in my family is mentally handicapped. My heart goes out to you too .




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