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Array ( [sid] => 181442 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => step into the light [time] => 2015-07-14 18:48:10 [hometext] => for peeps wrestling with drug addiction you have a special talent. you know what you have to do just take the step. He will reward you! [bodytext] => i offer my hand
for your glory
to open my mind
so you can paste
wisdom and direction
to the other injured souls
whose late
nights
cry on the
arrival of the sun
every morning
drowning in Satan's poison

please listen to His call
risk to say no
come out the allyes
be patient
trust that your life will
change course
surrender
to follow His path set out for you
reward
will appear clear
fulfilling your deepest desires
and unreachable dreams
swift and effortless
He wants you to act first
I know its not easy
but take this unfamiliar path
your wings will get strong
and you will soar free
filled with joy
high far from the dark
holes of
yesterday
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step into the light

Contributed by gfour on Tuesday, 14th July 2015 @ 06:48:10 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

i offer my hand
for your glory
to open my mind
so you can paste
wisdom and direction
to the other injured souls
whose late
nights
cry on the
arrival of the sun
every morning
drowning in Satan's poison

please listen to His call
risk to say no
come out the allyes
be patient
trust that your life will
change course
surrender
to follow His path set out for you
reward
will appear clear
fulfilling your deepest desires
and unreachable dreams
swift and effortless
He wants you to act first
I know its not easy
but take this unfamiliar path
your wings will get strong
and you will soar free
filled with joy
high far from the dark
holes of
yesterday

Copyright © gfour ... [ 2015-07-14 18:48:10]
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Re: step into the light (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Wednesday, 15th July 2015 @ 07:52:22 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: step into the light (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 16th July 2015 @ 05:50:37 AM AEST
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Quite optimistic...a shame it isn't as easy to reach 'unreachable dreams swift and effortless..."

Do you write from experience or thoughts and assumptions of what drug addiction is?

Either way, I enjoyed the read and compliment your effort.

Invierno

Re: step into the light (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 05:07:06 PM AEST
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I fell down the rabbit hole and it feels like I shall fall in this darkness forever more and each and everytime I think I've reached the bottom and shake the sand from my feet to stand upon solid ground suddenly I fall again and all my feet find is more sand. Maybe they shall stand firm and take confident strides and maybe I shall act out this scene in real life leave this neverending longitute latitute act without acting myself with theright attitude' it would be nice to tread the boards as you saygood to turn a new page act ing out real life now you have set the stage. Loved your poem. Truly inspiring.x

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