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I saw way past skin, I saw what lies within

I opened my eyes, and you know what I saw?
I saw depth and character, the things that truly matter

I opened my eyes and you know what I saw?
People getting to know the man, and because of that, joining hands

I opened my eyes and you know what I saw?
Not a confusion or a separation, but a collaboration

I opened my eyes, and you know what I saw?
It was a medley, a fusion
People, I have come to one conclusion

Shallow thoughts toss em
Try being colorblind, it's awesome
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Colorblind Awesome

Contributed by Beyfoxman5 on Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 04:22:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I opened my eyes, and you know what I saw?
I saw way past skin, I saw what lies within

I opened my eyes, and you know what I saw?
I saw depth and character, the things that truly matter

I opened my eyes and you know what I saw?
People getting to know the man, and because of that, joining hands

I opened my eyes and you know what I saw?
Not a confusion or a separation, but a collaboration

I opened my eyes, and you know what I saw?
It was a medley, a fusion
People, I have come to one conclusion

Shallow thoughts toss em
Try being colorblind, it's awesome

Copyright © Beyfoxman5 ... [ 2015-07-11 16:22:16]
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Re: Colorblind Awesome (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 11th July 2015 @ 06:30:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful write Fox
Super flow and a very pertinent poem
for our time.
One of my favorites from you.
It was crisp and that is GOOD!

James

Re: Colorblind Awesome (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 12:25:41 AM AEST
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open up to all people no matter how they do
look, and you will will find
You will find incredible beauty you never
knew before existed.

Be aesthetically pure!

Love all your poems Beyfoxman5, because
they're awesome!

Peace!

Re: Colorblind Awesome (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 01:23:54 AM AEST
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Colorblind Kool

Re: Colorblind Awesome (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 12th July 2015 @ 06:49:46 AM AEST
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beautifully penned, i love it!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Colorblind Awesome (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Monday, 13th July 2015 @ 08:35:55 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Colorblind Awesome (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Thursday, 16th July 2015 @ 06:04:24 AM AEST
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"Shallow thoughts toss em
Try being colorblind, it's awesome"

Clever play there.

I wonder though; how long were your eyes closed? What caused them to 'open'? What did you see when they were 'closed'?

the answer to those questions would make for some good poetry, if honestly addressed.

thanks for writing this, fox.

Re: Colorblind Awesome (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th July 2015 @ 02:23:14 PM AEST
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Perfectly delivered. No aggression, no spite. Just the truth. You nailed it , buddy. x

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