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She has a million steps to go but it is loving life even more everyday

There are times she wanted to vanish but there was always somebody there not letting her stop!

To two of the most beautiful and strongest women in the world!
Grandma may you rest in peace i miss you so much!
Mom you are amazing and thank you for everything you do

As I write the pen drops
but her life will never come to a stop! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 21 [informant] => FindingMyself [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Never stop!

Contributed by FindingMyself on Friday, 3rd July 2015 @ 01:10:32 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

So close yet so far...
She has a million steps to go but it is loving life even more everyday

There are times she wanted to vanish but there was always somebody there not letting her stop!

To two of the most beautiful and strongest women in the world!
Grandma may you rest in peace i miss you so much!
Mom you are amazing and thank you for everything you do

As I write the pen drops
but her life will never come to a stop!

Copyright © FindingMyself ... [ 2015-07-03 01:10:32]
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Re: Never stop! (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Friday, 3rd July 2015 @ 05:27:08 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Never stop! (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 4th July 2015 @ 08:21:53 AM AEST
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Heart felt poem
Short and sweet that way I like them

James

Re: Never stop! (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Saturday, 4th July 2015 @ 03:52:20 PM AEST
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Wow, something about this impresses me, but on a level I only think I understand.

To wish not to be, not suffer slings, nor arrows, but instead vanish and avoid that which is, and no longer take part in such a system...

But, two guardians of rash judgment, stalwart moral guides refusing entry to the exit.

They are thanked when what they do is understood, and after writing the life still doesn't end.

With that being said, the line "but her life will never come to a stop!"

It's simple, blatant and explicit, but the emotion behind it, I'm not familiar with, and so it's mysterious and profound.

Great write. :)

Re: Never stop! (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Saturday, 4th July 2015 @ 07:10:29 PM AEST
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lovely poem! touching.

Re: Never stop! (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 25th July 2015 @ 04:14:22 PM AEST
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Poignant and captivating.....short and sweet.
It never ceases to amaze me how words can make such an impact.
Perhaps if more people wrote poetry the world would be a better place!!

Steve

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