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Array ( [sid] => 181362 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Azul Lotus [time] => 2015-06-28 11:11:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when I woke up this morning
the birds were flying round
as some clouds floated serenely
up high in the sky...
I'm just chilling
getting my smile on
with a twinkle in my eye.
There is nothing wrong
there's no ill wind flowing
it's strangely beautiful
when nothing is happening,
I'm just chilling
listening to the birds talking.

As I sip my tea
a memory makes me smile
and I 'm digging the sensation
of just being human for awhile,
there is no dismay
Inner visions are flowing free
don't mean to waste your time
I just felt like sharing the feeling.
I'm not new to this
but
I've haven't felt this way for a long time. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 333 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Azul Lotus

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 11:11:08 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

when I woke up this morning
the birds were flying round
as some clouds floated serenely
up high in the sky...
I'm just chilling
getting my smile on
with a twinkle in my eye.
There is nothing wrong
there's no ill wind flowing
it's strangely beautiful
when nothing is happening,
I'm just chilling
listening to the birds talking.

As I sip my tea
a memory makes me smile
and I 'm digging the sensation
of just being human for awhile,
there is no dismay
Inner visions are flowing free
don't mean to waste your time
I just felt like sharing the feeling.
I'm not new to this
but
I've haven't felt this way for a long time.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2015-06-28 11:11:08]
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Re: Azul Lotus (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 11:18:45 AM AEST
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This was no waste of time at all. Really liked reading this and thank you for sharing. Sounds like a great day! Glad you're feeling good. Tim

Re: Azul Lotus (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 11:23:15 AM AEST
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A tonic. Thank you for your thoughts in your chilling moment. Having a quiet drink, listening to the birds and musing, is one of my favourite pastimes.This was no waste of anyone's time.

Re: Azul Lotus (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 11:52:00 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful and made me happy! thank you!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Azul Lotus (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 02:20:26 PM AEST
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what a warm feeling I get when reading this. serenity and the beauty of nature . love this!

Re: Azul Lotus (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Sunday, 28th June 2015 @ 04:50:07 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: Azul Lotus (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Monday, 29th June 2015 @ 12:35:27 AM AEST
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Great way to feel and a gift to the reader to feel that way too.

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