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Upon the floor shattered pieces of porcelain lay
While a pair cerulean eyes and a Mona Lisa smile stare
From mahogany colored boards through empty space
At amber stars painted on a ceiling of white

With pieces scattered like the stars across a canvas of midnight
Haunting my dreams are the cracked rosy cheeks of a hand-painted childlike face
And her velvet wings, white as snow, now carry its spirit with such care
Up to Heaven where its little golden harp will once again play

2015
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Broken Angel

Contributed by ingeniusidiot on Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 01:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Broken Angel

Upon the floor shattered pieces of porcelain lay
While a pair cerulean eyes and a Mona Lisa smile stare
From mahogany colored boards through empty space
At amber stars painted on a ceiling of white

With pieces scattered like the stars across a canvas of midnight
Haunting my dreams are the cracked rosy cheeks of a hand-painted childlike face
And her velvet wings, white as snow, now carry its spirit with such care
Up to Heaven where its little golden harp will once again play

2015

Copyright © ingeniusidiot ... [ 2015-06-26 13:46:12]
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Re: Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 03:10:45 PM AEST
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awww... this is sadly sweet, and beautiful!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Friday, 26th June 2015 @ 08:03:23 PM AEST
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brilliant, beautiful, sad.

huggs to you.

Re: Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 29th June 2015 @ 10:53:45 PM AEST
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I felt such sadness while reading this.You must let me know where this came from.

Love ya
huggers too
Shall

Re: Broken Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 18th February 2019 @ 08:41:21 PM AEST
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This was brilliant.
Not to sound or come off as stupid but I/'/m not sure why this is so impressive. You seem to spit it out without great care but it reads as a finely crafted piece. You do it so well it sort of fools you.

Many here get too fancy with words and it ruins the piece. This is a marvel but oh so readable...
Truly beautiful and of course impressive!

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