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Array ( [sid] => 181279 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Be Who I think you are [time] => 2015-06-13 20:33:23 [hometext] => Needs no introduction [bodytext] => Walking through the door, stumbling through the crowd
What I see sure screams out loud
A slight underbite, hard to beat
You're the kind everyone should meet

Sweet, sleepy eyes, i will never blink
They draw me in and make me think
Does your outside match your inside
Between those two, I hope there's no divide

I stand right here, a complete mess
Just one request for that little black dress

Be who I think you are

Just sitting right there scrolling on your phone
Oh my darlin' it's my eyes you own
I can't stand it, an "I love you" I mutter
With just one look, you've turned me to butter

Your're summer breeze 
I'm weak at the knees
You've made be believe 
What I think is true

I stand right here, a complete mess
Just one request for that little black dress

Be who I think you are

My mouth is dry, I want nothing to drink 
I need this time to think
Please don't disappoint, give me a surprise 
Tell me the truth with those sleepy eyes

You're a match in an out
A gift from the heavens, there is no doubt
You're not just a silhouette you've made me believe 
You've brought me back, just what I need

I stand right here, a complete mess
Just one request for that little black dress

Be who I think you are [comments] => 4 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Beyfoxman5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Be Who I think you are

Contributed by Beyfoxman5 on Saturday, 13th June 2015 @ 08:33:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Walking through the door, stumbling through the crowd
What I see sure screams out loud
A slight underbite, hard to beat
You're the kind everyone should meet

Sweet, sleepy eyes, i will never blink
They draw me in and make me think
Does your outside match your inside
Between those two, I hope there's no divide

I stand right here, a complete mess
Just one request for that little black dress

Be who I think you are

Just sitting right there scrolling on your phone
Oh my darlin' it's my eyes you own
I can't stand it, an "I love you" I mutter
With just one look, you've turned me to butter

Your're summer breeze 
I'm weak at the knees
You've made be believe 
What I think is true

I stand right here, a complete mess
Just one request for that little black dress

Be who I think you are

My mouth is dry, I want nothing to drink 
I need this time to think
Please don't disappoint, give me a surprise 
Tell me the truth with those sleepy eyes

You're a match in an out
A gift from the heavens, there is no doubt
You're not just a silhouette you've made me believe 
You've brought me back, just what I need

I stand right here, a complete mess
Just one request for that little black dress

Be who I think you are




Copyright © Beyfoxman5 ... [ 2015-06-13 20:33:23]
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Re: Be Who I think you are (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 13th June 2015 @ 09:53:33 PM AEST
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aww that's sweet! you created atmosphere and everything!

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Be Who I think you are (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th June 2015 @ 02:18:02 AM AEST
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something you got is planted in your minds eye
and it's good.

this is insightful and fun to read.

It's the secret we can't reveal, the sweet sorrowful
world.

Great write.

Peace


Re: Be Who I think you are (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th June 2015 @ 09:38:43 AM AEST
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Awesome stuff here. I could really visualize a lot of this.

Thanks,

Tim


Re: Be Who I think you are (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Sunday, 14th June 2015 @ 06:10:32 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B




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