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I fly with the birds
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
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Wednesday, 3rd June 2015 @ 11:18:12 AM in AEST
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I fly with the birds, the limitless sky
Between worlds
The storm simmers
Calm the deceiving sea
Below the surface
Wild rage
I rush to the fire, the moths and me
Burning desire
Entwined
Below the weeping willow tree
Peace
Side by side
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thezenmonkey
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2015-06-03 11:18:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I fly with the birds
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 4th June 2015 @ 07:06:38 AM AEST (User
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Choice words indeed! Great imagery.
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Re: I fly with the birds
(User Rating: 1 ) by alicewhite on
Saturday, 20th June 2015 @ 03:17:15 AM AEST (User
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I stumbled upon your poem just after dreaming that I was flying with a flock of birds doing loops in formation' it wa?s mindblowing and exhilerating at the time .and the random coincidence of me reading this poem straight after only served to blow my mind and exilerate me in my wakin life ten fold. A truly magical beyond chance unexplainable event for me. I love mystery.x mpretty sure that quantum mechanics and especially quantum entanglement theory will explain these kind of events in the future.x |
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