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Words to Save Lives
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
on
Wednesday, 3rd June 2015 @ 01:28:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As the fire dances in the moon light,
And smoke floats to the sky,
On a dark night,
The body starts to die,
But in hopes it may be a savior,
The soul survives,
Poured on paper,
Are the words to save lives.
Copyright ©
lonelywolf04
... [
2015-06-03 01:28:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Words to Save Lives
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 3rd June 2015 @ 08:21:56 AM AEST (User
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Sometimes less is more.
Me likes it!
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Re: Words to Save Lives
(User Rating: 1 ) by thezenmonkey on
Wednesday, 3rd June 2015 @ 12:05:31 PM AEST (User
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very beautiful
says much with a few choice words
very good imagery aswell |
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