Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:18:22 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 181201 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Evil Is Born [time] => 2015-05-29 02:39:44 [hometext] => Dark quick right [bodytext] => Completely distorted absolutely insane
Running wild but not free with all the time to complain

Visions of demons and battle cry's
No one knows his secrets there all spreading lies

Disrupted since birth fresh out the womb
Every evil in life he has consumed

Born in the rain from an overdosed dead mother
Out on the ground a twin to his dead brother

Raised on the streets by a drug infested fiend
Never known nice been shown nothing but mean

Older now he walks the streets alone at night
Only to be seen under a street light

Only for a moment you may catch a glance
Of his awkward slightly limping stance

Before turning back into the dark
Not to be seen till the next night he walks in the park

Aaron D. Carman [comments] => 5 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 68 [informant] => crmnlilbruno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fictional )

Evil Is Born

Contributed by crmnlilbruno on Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 02:39:44 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional

Completely distorted absolutely insane
Running wild but not free with all the time to complain

Visions of demons and battle cry's
No one knows his secrets there all spreading lies

Disrupted since birth fresh out the womb
Every evil in life he has consumed

Born in the rain from an overdosed dead mother
Out on the ground a twin to his dead brother

Raised on the streets by a drug infested fiend
Never known nice been shown nothing but mean

Older now he walks the streets alone at night
Only to be seen under a street light

Only for a moment you may catch a glance
Of his awkward slightly limping stance

Before turning back into the dark
Not to be seen till the next night he walks in the park

Aaron D. Carman

Copyright © crmnlilbruno ... [ 2015-05-29 02:39:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Evil Is Born (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 09:14:01 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hmm. It feels like you were going for shock value with this piece, but not enough layers were peeled off. None of the 'shocking' lines were followed up. It seems as though you have much to get off your chest, and with a little more time spent you could probably deliver a wallop. Keep up the writes, and I would suggest spell check, or allow a mod to fix your grammatical errors next time.

~Scorp

Re: Evil Is Born (User Rating: 1 )
by desciple on Saturday, 30th May 2015 @ 03:05:06 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This poem spoke to me, it was gritty, simple, and to the point. It gave me glimpse of what its like to walk in your shoes from a distance. Rapid fire I like the delivery, keep'em coming, enjoyed the write...beautifully penned

Re: Evil Is Born (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th May 2015 @ 10:23:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

well done!!! I think there is a cognitive dissonance
society holds when it comes down to understanding
the human condition as a whole.

walking in the rain up the hill in the darkest of night
I came upon him, the street man,
all his belongings at his side, he stood
like a statue with his knife waiting to strike...

Peace!

Re: Evil Is Born (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Tuesday, 2nd June 2015 @ 05:44:27 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

My thoughts are distorted, why weren't you aborted?
Believe me its wrong, and still a sad song.
I know what you mean, see my life is not clean.
Cause I've sat in that place, I've seen your own face.
And I'm standing here, as a friend that'll care.
I'm no stranger who'll stare, come Evil no fear.

Ha you know I felt this one. Good write.

Re: Evil Is Born (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 01:21:49 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Very Cool Piece!!
Keep writing
ANd sharing
forever!!
Peace
$tr8 $av

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com