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Array ( [sid] => 181200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thoughts of You [time] => 2015-05-29 02:23:02 [hometext] => A quick right about thoughts of someone (feedback is welcome) [bodytext] => You are a wonderful person that is no doubt
Completely beautiful inside and out

You make me smile and giggle each time I see you
All of the above you and I know is true

You speak with pure honesty never with a lie
Making each time I spend with you harder to say goodbye

Skin so soft with the touch of my hand
Something no man could could of possibly planned

Smile so bright it cannot be ignored
With you there's no way one could be bored

Always something you do or something you say
That makes me think of you at the wake of each day

Making my days better with just a simple text
Makes me wonder what is in store for me next

You hold your stuffed rabbit softly against your face
Even watching you do this my heart picks up pace

You have turned a bad day into the best
Need not to explain that day to the rest

Aaron D. Carman [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 48 [informant] => crmnlilbruno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Thoughts of You

Contributed by crmnlilbruno on Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 02:23:02 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You are a wonderful person that is no doubt
Completely beautiful inside and out

You make me smile and giggle each time I see you
All of the above you and I know is true

You speak with pure honesty never with a lie
Making each time I spend with you harder to say goodbye

Skin so soft with the touch of my hand
Something no man could could of possibly planned

Smile so bright it cannot be ignored
With you there's no way one could be bored

Always something you do or something you say
That makes me think of you at the wake of each day

Making my days better with just a simple text
Makes me wonder what is in store for me next

You hold your stuffed rabbit softly against your face
Even watching you do this my heart picks up pace

You have turned a bad day into the best
Need not to explain that day to the rest

Aaron D. Carman

Copyright © crmnlilbruno ... [ 2015-05-29 02:23:02]
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Re: Thoughts of You (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 09:17:55 AM AEST
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Dude, you posted TWO poems with the incorrect use of "right" in your author's note. I didn't even read this poem as a result of that unfortunate oversight.

Are you a writer or a righter ?

~Scorp

Re: Thoughts of You (User Rating: 1 )
by thezenmonkey on Sunday, 31st May 2015 @ 07:22:49 AM AEST
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i did read the poem
its a good poem

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