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Array ( [sid] => 181192 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sour Patch [time] => 2015-05-27 02:15:02 [hometext] => more madness writing on impulse [bodytext] => Sour then sweet
When we first meet
But now it's gone
Like the silence after a song

Waiting for another taste
Wait for your return
Not wanting this time to go to waste
I've lost my sour patch

After I had grown so attached
Sour but sweet to her core
I wanted to know her more
But now we are away
In a way like the silence after a song waiting for a new verse to sing along

Where did the time go when did we grow so apart this silence is killing me I just want to scream maybe then you'll find me [comments] => 1 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 43 [informant] => voice of the silent [notes] => Edited as requested ~ Moderator_18 ~ May 27, 2015 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Sour Patch

Contributed by voice of the silent on Wednesday, 27th May 2015 @ 02:15:02 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Sour then sweet
When we first meet
But now it's gone
Like the silence after a song

Waiting for another taste
Wait for your return
Not wanting this time to go to waste
I've lost my sour patch

After I had grown so attached
Sour but sweet to her core
I wanted to know her more
But now we are away
In a way like the silence after a song waiting for a new verse to sing along

Where did the time go when did we grow so apart this silence is killing me I just want to scream maybe then you'll find me

Copyright © voice of the silent ... [ 2015-05-27 02:15:02]
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Re: Sour Patch (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Wednesday, 27th May 2015 @ 01:26:04 PM AEST
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So much agony, yet promise, within the words you write. Dream lost, found, lost, yet still dreams on. Very compelling and honest write, very nice, P

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