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Array ( [sid] => 181186 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Moments I Hate [time] => 2015-05-25 16:26:06 [hometext] => By: E. Wayne Searles [bodytext] =>
I really hate this feeling
the feeling that comes over me
A feeling of hatred from depression
it changes the feelings inside, you see

People turn out to be my enemy
I just don’t want them around
I hate the life I’m living
at this moment it’s where I’m bound

It’s sad to say
this feeling always comes and goes
I have no idea what would be a cure
not even sure if a doctor knows

I just came from shopping
limping around in so much pain
Feeling like I am under a big black cloud
and all it does is rain

I can imagine people must see
my face full of anger and hate
As I wander in my own world
which many cannot relate

Yes I hate this feeling
this form of depression really gets me down
I would rather people not see so much anger
but my face smiling or just a little frown

I just feel so empty and lost
clueless to my purpose at this time, you see
I really hate these moments in life
somehow I just have to shake it free


Written on 25 May 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net
poeticquest@hotmail.com
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 61 [informant] => waynster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Moments I Hate

Contributed by waynster on Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 04:26:06 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles




I really hate this feeling
the feeling that comes over me
A feeling of hatred from depression
it changes the feelings inside, you see

People turn out to be my enemy
I just don’t want them around
I hate the life I’m living
at this moment it’s where I’m bound

It’s sad to say
this feeling always comes and goes
I have no idea what would be a cure
not even sure if a doctor knows

I just came from shopping
limping around in so much pain
Feeling like I am under a big black cloud
and all it does is rain

I can imagine people must see
my face full of anger and hate
As I wander in my own world
which many cannot relate

Yes I hate this feeling
this form of depression really gets me down
I would rather people not see so much anger
but my face smiling or just a little frown

I just feel so empty and lost
clueless to my purpose at this time, you see
I really hate these moments in life
somehow I just have to shake it free


Written on 25 May 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
http://www.poeticquest-1.biglaunch.net
poeticquest@hotmail.com




Copyright © waynster ... [ 2015-05-25 16:26:06]
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Re: Moments I Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by tin on Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 08:09:14 PM AEST
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I, for one, can relate. I've spent a great deal of time living in the state you described so well. Thank you for sharing, and keep writing.


Re: Moments I Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 08:32:14 PM AEST
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Very genuine, and also relates to me.

'As I wander in my own world' that is a wonderful way of putting it.

I enjoyed this very much, I'm looking forward to reading more.


Re: Moments I Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 10:04:42 PM AEST
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hang in there my friend,

hugs n' love nessa




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