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[aid] => mick
[title] => Nature's Wrath
[time] => 2015-05-17 07:56:31
[hometext] => for my mom, who has been dealing with a crisis of her own for almost two years
[bodytext] => A gentle rain,
The falling leaves;
Nature's kiss
A soothing breeze.
The white of snow,
The flowers bloom;
The storms will come
With clouds of gloom.
The push of wind,
Tornadoes grow;
The pull of waves,
Hurricanes blow.
I like to sit
And watch the sea.
It sometimes helps
In calming me.
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Nature's Wrath
Contributed by
speedy
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Sunday, 17th May 2015 @ 07:56:31 AM in AEST
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A gentle rain,
The falling leaves;
Nature's kiss
A soothing breeze.
The white of snow,
The flowers bloom;
The storms will come
With clouds of gloom.
The push of wind,
Tornadoes grow;
The pull of waves,
Hurricanes blow.
I like to sit
And watch the sea.
It sometimes helps
In calming me.
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speedy
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by softerware on
Sunday, 17th May 2015 @ 12:38:43 PM AEST
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This is full of emotion, from the kiss of nature to her violent storms, ending with the eternal sea..the one constant in a world we cannot control.
This bears re-reading to follow the ebb and swell of the seasons of the heart. The rhythm is rich; the colors simple; the message--renewal.
Tell your mother that she did a good job.
softerware
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 21st May 2015 @ 06:28:33 AM AEST
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| beautiful imagery |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 25th May 2015 @ 04:45:31 PM AEST
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sooo beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 26th May 2015 @ 07:52:46 AM AEST
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| Free flowing perfection.............! |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th June 2015 @ 10:38:40 AM AEST
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Sublime! In (almost) all senses of the word.
Cheers,
Mickey |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th June 2015 @ 08:42:17 PM AEST
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| This is a delight to read! Every word seems to be chosen and placed so perfectly. |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th June 2015 @ 10:53:03 AM AEST
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| The comparison of nature's wrath with personal turmoil is a good one. Your conclusion is calming and positive, as hopefully the waves subside. A poem of which I'm sure your mom is delighted, and surely proud of the author. |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 03:26:36 PM AEST
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Perfection! Way to utilize nature to its fullest. Great symbolism.
~Scorp |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 07:34:50 PM AEST
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| Makes so much sense to me ' enough to wonder if your mum is mirror imageing me ' like alice just is without thinking untill eating stones or body of christ growing BIG or VICE VERCER crucifiction blood thirst takes over drink me is what it says on the label ' I shrink as I drink contemplating my navel . Thanks for that . Its like its all making sense to me now. So thankyou and just WOW xxx |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 8th August 2015 @ 06:19:54 AM AEST
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This carries a soft tone of hope for personal reflection.
Much as if you see these patterns of weather, as metaphors, and the sea? Well metaphorically it's possibly a few things, peace and serenity, or the source of the gloom that came before. The first makes more sense based on the write, but the latter is interesting as a concept, because of the thought of looking toward the future making the world as is far more endurable. |
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Re: Nature's Wrath
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by Mohansundar on
Tuesday, 21st April 2020 @ 02:44:58 PM AEST
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| very nicely written. Mother Nature always wields profound influence on us |
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