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It's not happening thus it's but a bad dream

A man lies pale, wasting away whilst in his prime
Slowly, painfully, fading away before it's time

Mother, father by his side tending to his every need
Family and friends gather to hope, pray he'll succeed

Cancer they say has come to claim another loved one
It's too soon; you can't have him; he's way too young

His eyes and smile still the same man we watched grow
But his poor body's trying to tell us it's time; he must go

He struggles to stay, using all the strength he can find
He doesn't want to go, leaving a grieving family behind

In his short time, he gave laughter, love, made us glad
To have known this blessed son, brother, friend and dad

Why him, not fair, not right this death's intrusion on his life
The mere thought of his loss cuts the soul with a black knife

So many stories, memories left for him to tell and create
God, please, we pray, don't allow death to write his fate

One more smile, one final story, tight hugs, sad kisses goodbye
Never to understand the loss of you, no matter how we try [comments] => 6 [counter] => 337 [topic] => 52 [informant] => dvtpdw [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Fading

Contributed by dvtpdw on Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 12:53:16 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



There is no answer to this query I scream
It's not happening thus it's but a bad dream

A man lies pale, wasting away whilst in his prime
Slowly, painfully, fading away before it's time

Mother, father by his side tending to his every need
Family and friends gather to hope, pray he'll succeed

Cancer they say has come to claim another loved one
It's too soon; you can't have him; he's way too young

His eyes and smile still the same man we watched grow
But his poor body's trying to tell us it's time; he must go

He struggles to stay, using all the strength he can find
He doesn't want to go, leaving a grieving family behind

In his short time, he gave laughter, love, made us glad
To have known this blessed son, brother, friend and dad

Why him, not fair, not right this death's intrusion on his life
The mere thought of his loss cuts the soul with a black knife

So many stories, memories left for him to tell and create
God, please, we pray, don't allow death to write his fate

One more smile, one final story, tight hugs, sad kisses goodbye
Never to understand the loss of you, no matter how we try




Copyright © dvtpdw ... [ 2015-05-11 12:53:16]
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Re: Fading (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 03:26:18 PM AEST
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It's amazing you still seem to effortlessly write the way you do under these conditions. You never fail to impress.

Losing too many loved ones to that horrid disease, I relate too well, so I know your pain.

Wishing he and your family did not have to endure this.

So sorry, ♥

Tim


Re: Fading (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 03:40:54 PM AEST
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Same remarks as Tim
God Bless Brian!
Sort of hard for me to say much more
Easter day I was there.


Re: Fading (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 04:14:20 PM AEST
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in tears over here, recently lost a cousin to this, blessings,

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Fading (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 08:54:18 PM AEST
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Hear, hear. I agree with Tim, James & Nessa.

I have lost a few family members to it as well as a family friend. It isn't easy & it's not fair, but there's always a part of them that stays with you.

Great write. It was beautiful.

Hannah B


Re: Fading (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Monday, 11th May 2015 @ 08:57:11 PM AEST
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Very moving poem. The trials of life. wow.


Re: Fading (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Tuesday, 12th May 2015 @ 02:22:42 PM AEST
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really sad truth of life..its painful only poetry can cut through the pain yet not demean it...




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