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Array ( [sid] => 18110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Untitled-4 [time] => 2003-05-27 22:45:00 [hometext] => A true story about my mother who passed away when I was only 5 [bodytext] => Just waiting for that final bell that marked
the school days end
I stood on the corner as my pre-adolescent mind replayed the days events
It was during this period of reflection
that I saw you
As the car stopped I expected you to get out
Running to hold me and explain why you
had left me like that
With me cursing that which you had done had
taken my faith in God
I had so much to say as the stalled car
started and pulled away
The emotions then weren't unlike 5 years
earlier
When I touched your lifeless hand
and said good-bye to my mother

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Untitled-4

Contributed by UnleashedFuture on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Just waiting for that final bell that marked
the school days end
I stood on the corner as my pre-adolescent mind replayed the days events
It was during this period of reflection
that I saw you
As the car stopped I expected you to get out
Running to hold me and explain why you
had left me like that
With me cursing that which you had done had
taken my faith in God
I had so much to say as the stalled car
started and pulled away
The emotions then weren't unlike 5 years
earlier
When I touched your lifeless hand
and said good-bye to my mother

Copyright © UnleashedFuture ... [ 2003-05-27 22:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled-4 (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:55:35 AM AEST
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Tragedy in childhood is so so private you made me realise.

Re: Untitled-4 (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 03:32:48 AM AEST
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this is an awesome poem you are really talented.

Re: Untitled-4 (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:39:16 AM AEST
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OMG How touching this was!
My husband lost his mom at 8 of cancer !
Its has to be tough not having her to grow up with! So sad,but well done! Christina

Re: Untitled-4 (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:36:51 AM AEST
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WOW

Re: Untitled-4 (User Rating: 1 )
by Chuckx on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:51:19 PM AEST
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good poem. I like the feeling expressed...so sad. (I'm going to have to sign Chuckx from now on.)

Re: Untitled-4 (User Rating: 1 )
by fluffy on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 02:39:40 PM AEST
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well inleast you got to know your mother for five years my dad died when i was born.
But i am very impressed with your poem! well done!

Re: Untitled-4 (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 08:21:38 AM AEST
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We hold back those feelings and emotions, yet one day they all are released. I feel yours always.

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