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i patterned myself after a disaster
that was my first mistake
nothing but a travesty draped in a tragedy
that ruins and rots while i wait

consumed by this hole that just grows
trapped in a troubling bubble of Crave
a prisoner of my own smile, defiled
destined to dance to the grave

i saw that the path was winding towards madness
but doggedly stuck to the plan
i gnaw at the last of what once was my tongue
and choke on whatever i can

i laugh at the way the tears cascade
a shadow with shine-unscorn
i cringe at my lack of the appropriate fear
i wonder if underground's warm

J.D. Howell
4-20-2015 [comments] => 5 [counter] => 332 [topic] => 66 [informant] => Jigget [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

crave

Contributed by Jigget on Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 05:52:27 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

crave

i patterned myself after a disaster
that was my first mistake
nothing but a travesty draped in a tragedy
that ruins and rots while i wait

consumed by this hole that just grows
trapped in a troubling bubble of Crave
a prisoner of my own smile, defiled
destined to dance to the grave

i saw that the path was winding towards madness
but doggedly stuck to the plan
i gnaw at the last of what once was my tongue
and choke on whatever i can

i laugh at the way the tears cascade
a shadow with shine-unscorn
i cringe at my lack of the appropriate fear
i wonder if underground's warm

J.D. Howell
4-20-2015

Copyright © Jigget ... [ 2015-04-21 05:52:27]
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Re: crave (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 08:53:44 AM AEST
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Well written and honest verse.

Michelle

Re: crave (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 22nd April 2015 @ 07:47:48 PM AEST
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If your poem speaks of taking the wrong path and sticking to it, you certainly wouldn't know it by your gift for writing.
Being strong enough not to give in to emotion "I cringe at my lack of appropriate fear" is a talent that serves you well. It is called courage.
softerware

Re: crave (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 23rd April 2015 @ 12:18:44 AM AEST
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The crave will remain
but
dodge that path of madness
when you see it.

Re: crave (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 25th April 2015 @ 06:13:27 AM AEST
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Hells hot bud. Trust me. And as for comments yeah they are hard to come by. Again trust me.

Re: crave (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 01:36:15 AM AEST
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OMG!!
this is helllla goood!!
perfect length and creepy deep!!
Keep writing
and sharing
forever!
peace
$tr8 $av

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