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Array ( [sid] => 180996 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Destitute Prostitute [time] => 2015-04-12 21:28:53 [hometext] => For about three hours I was working holding back tears in stalemate. I felt depressed, more so than I've ever been. This poem here is to reflect upon that, a mood of poetry I have almost never written of. Thank God it's over. [bodytext] => (If this offends anybody in any way shape or form, I am truly sorry, but this is how I felt, at my lowest low I've known. I hope I never feel this way again, nor anybody else.)


I am now emotionally a destitute prostitute,
With all wisdom and being now to refute
A beaten and bludgeoned whore
One whose game with life, possesses a truly unfair score

I end up giving out my service, and I give them out for free
For at this waking moment, sorrow is my only currency
Tonight I wish to share my bed, with a woman that I own,
Just so while I bear this pain, at least I'm not alone
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Destitute Prostitute

Contributed by xHeathenx on Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 09:28:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



(If this offends anybody in any way shape or form, I am truly sorry, but this is how I felt, at my lowest low I've known. I hope I never feel this way again, nor anybody else.)


I am now emotionally a destitute prostitute,
With all wisdom and being now to refute
A beaten and bludgeoned whore
One whose game with life, possesses a truly unfair score

I end up giving out my service, and I give them out for free
For at this waking moment, sorrow is my only currency
Tonight I wish to share my bed, with a woman that I own,
Just so while I bear this pain, at least I'm not alone




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Re: Destitute Prostitute (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 09:53:30 PM AEST
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I like it. I wish there was more to it.....(to the poem of course, not the emotions behind them)

If you write more about this I would love to read it. To be at a place, where you feel like that, is some pretty intense feelings. Don't hold that ***** in. It's not healthy.

Expressing yourself creatively is great. Making personal choices to treat yourself better is even greater!
Hugs!


Re: Destitute Prostitute (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 11:17:41 PM AEST
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Hi there

First and foremost. Should anyone judge you they will be judged by the same measure. So fear not and know this GOD LOVES you. The poem Freckle is quite correct let it flow to write its good for you. I say this with respect you have more than one talent WRITTING so write some more it will help. The poem it self very well structured easy to read yet sad. Take care and God bless and remember if you bow a knee to God you stand free before Him and amongst men. God bless. TFS

Greetings
Rus


Re: Destitute Prostitute (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 06:29:34 AM AEST
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Terrific! This is most excellently raw, and raw is always better than polished.

Well done.

Invierno


Re: Destitute Prostitute (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Monday, 10th August 2015 @ 09:45:05 AM AEST
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Sparsely written but deeply emotional.
I think the poem said it all.
Terrific!

James


Re: Destitute Prostitute (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 01:42:31 AM AEST
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great piece!!
i too have my
select few
whore poems
from a time way before!!!
i can relate totally!
keep writing
and sharing
forever!
Peace
$tr8 $av




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