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Array ( [sid] => 180984 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Color Me Beautiful [time] => 2015-04-10 22:52:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => See me crystal clear.
I am a rainbow.
Every season of my soul shines through.
How I have become more real to life, then life itself.

Once the silhouette,
of the sun when it takes shape,
formly derived, hidden in the background.
How when it shines, it's face is more transparent to the reasons of life's growth.

Though I am not only a ray of light,
a ray of love, but both-
see what you see with the spectrum or not,
I am a butterfly of synergy,
and fully transformable.
Color me beautiful. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 30 [informant] => blossomwriter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )

Color Me Beautiful

Contributed by blossomwriter on Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 10:52:14 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

See me crystal clear.
I am a rainbow.
Every season of my soul shines through.
How I have become more real to life, then life itself.

Once the silhouette,
of the sun when it takes shape,
formly derived, hidden in the background.
How when it shines, it's face is more transparent to the reasons of life's growth.

Though I am not only a ray of light,
a ray of love, but both-
see what you see with the spectrum or not,
I am a butterfly of synergy,
and fully transformable.
Color me beautiful.

Copyright © blossomwriter ... [ 2015-04-10 22:52:14]
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Re: Color Me Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 10th April 2015 @ 11:02:07 PM AEST
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such gentle flowing lines, true exquisite beauty and such
a joy to read:)

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Color Me Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Saturday, 11th April 2015 @ 03:43:02 AM AEST
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Hi there

Yes I agree with Nessa a breath of fresh air. Great write. God bless. TFS

Greetings
Rus

Re: Color Me Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Saturday, 11th April 2015 @ 07:34:23 AM AEST
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This is really a special poem. The message is wonderful. The content and and structure speak to practice.

Your use of rhyme between two stanzas is a favourite little thing of mine.

"How when it shines, it's face is more transparent to the reasons of life's growth.

Though I am not only a ray of light,
a ray of love, but both-"

Very well done. Maturity of writing well defined here.

Invierno

Re: Color Me Beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 06:01:24 PM AEST
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I love this, sets a strangely peaceful mood in me, particularly the last 6 lines, wonderful work.

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