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Sometimes it's complete unrest
Regardless of the victor
The spoils are available
So I continue in hopes that the sown oats
Are anything but perishable

Every moment is a heaving hoe
Pulling fertile dirt over seeds you left to grow
So be sure to water said soil with your energy
Time is something like life that can't be shown your apathy
Positivity can rain amongst the fledglings
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Sown

Contributed by xHeathenx on Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 04:28:14 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Sometimes civility reigns
Sometimes it's complete unrest
Regardless of the victor
The spoils are available
So I continue in hopes that the sown oats
Are anything but perishable

Every moment is a heaving hoe
Pulling fertile dirt over seeds you left to grow
So be sure to water said soil with your energy
Time is something like life that can't be shown your apathy
Positivity can rain amongst the fledglings
While negativity may leave you with likewise belongings

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Re: Sown (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 02:41:47 PM AEST
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I particularly liked the line
"Every moment is a heaving hoe"
Something about that just hooked my attention even more.
Quite an impacting poem in a short space of words.
Great write

Steve

Re: Sown (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 08:44:26 PM AEST
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beautiful and so true, lest we be apathetic, you've made
me want to get my garden started too!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Sown (User Rating: 1 )
by blossomwriter on Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 09:54:41 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved this. Very powerful.

Re: Sown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 02:47:52 AM AEST
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this would be good on a bag of McDonald's
fast food
"what do they mean, how long is this food good for if you keep it refrigerated, when there's no date of expiration written on the box containing the McNuggets", thought the inquisitive little girl.
Peace!

Re: Sown (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Sunday, 12th April 2015 @ 09:57:27 PM AEST
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My favorite line is your fitting conclusion that "negativity may leave you with likewise belongings"..
We may not reap what we sow..but somebody will!
All the "luck" you ever enjoyed came from seeds that someone else nurtured..
"positivity can rain amongst the fledglings" is a quick reminder to leave more than we take, give more than we get, water, nurture, and teach your gifts to the curious!
Everything we know-- someone took the time to teach us. Here, in swift perfection, is a reminder to take the time to rain on the fledglings!
softerware

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