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Once I realize its true value, those moments have already perished.

Who's at fault when our time becomes essence-less?
When we begin to question our coexistence.
How do we make each moment resemble something of elegance?
Time must be at our mercy because time is merciless.

Forgive my sins and all my sins that may become friends.
The time I have left only depends.
Many circumstances.
Moments left up to chances.
I surrender to pessimistic thoughts on multiple occasions.
Only make moves when motivation is provided by mental persuasion.

Or when exteriors give me a motive.
Sometimes I fail to see the reason for the worth of pursuance.
Coagulated thoughts then become a nuisance.
Time never waits, so I watch time with prudence.
So maybe my time can be continued, rather than in conclusion. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 139 [topic] => 21 [informant] => mniw [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Ungrateful by m.n.i.w

Contributed by mniw on Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 12:06:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I got a fetish for neglecting things that I should cherish.
Once I realize its true value, those moments have already perished.

Who's at fault when our time becomes essence-less?
When we begin to question our coexistence.
How do we make each moment resemble something of elegance?
Time must be at our mercy because time is merciless.

Forgive my sins and all my sins that may become friends.
The time I have left only depends.
Many circumstances.
Moments left up to chances.
I surrender to pessimistic thoughts on multiple occasions.
Only make moves when motivation is provided by mental persuasion.

Or when exteriors give me a motive.
Sometimes I fail to see the reason for the worth of pursuance.
Coagulated thoughts then become a nuisance.
Time never waits, so I watch time with prudence.
So maybe my time can be continued, rather than in conclusion.

Copyright © mniw ... [ 2015-04-08 12:06:10]
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Re: Ungrateful by m.n.i.w (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 02:54:22 AM AEST
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Very impressive, deep,deep write.

Awesome.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Ungrateful by m.n.i.w (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 9th April 2015 @ 03:11:49 PM AEST
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Sometimes I read lines and I think, wow, wish I had written that.
"Time must be at our mercy because time is merciless." is one that leapt out at me here.
I enjoyed reading, felt as smooth as rich coffee

Great work

Steve

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