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Is a beaten queen,
With a love unclean,
Living a life unseen,

With black and blue in disguise,
As shades of pink around the eyes,
The pain hidden behind the smiling lies,
Of an angel's demise.

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Angel's Demise

Contributed by lonelywolf04 on Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 01:09:51 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The star of this scene,
Is a beaten queen,
With a love unclean,
Living a life unseen,

With black and blue in disguise,
As shades of pink around the eyes,
The pain hidden behind the smiling lies,
Of an angel's demise.

lonelywolf04, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems by our other authors for each one you submit. Please support our other authors. You have not read & commented since October 11 2012.

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Re: Angel's Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 01:38:27 AM AEST
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wow! images that jump off the page, this poem breathes!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Angel's Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 06:38:42 AM AEST
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Hi There

There is an entire autobiography in this poem. One must just read into it properly. Furthermore I would not call it dark poetry, move like life or anguish poetry. None the less however you categorize it, it's a very well constructed piece of work. TFS God bless

Greetings
Rus

Re: Angel's Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Wednesday, 8th April 2015 @ 06:53:30 AM AEST
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I'll agree with Rus, however regardless of whether or not this in fact relative to your own personal story or life, it's a great way to describe such an overlooked occurrence in our day-to-day life.

Re: Angel's Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 14th October 2015 @ 01:46:35 AM AEST
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Short
Solid
to the point!!
Great piece!!
Keep writing and posting
forever
peace
$tr8 $av

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