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Down on me

So self-absorbed was I
Full of need and greed
What's in it for me

Ignoring what I was given
In search of more
Looking for yet another
Big score

It was all about me
No one else you see
My heart full of desire
For what I should receive

Yes God shed a tear
Down on me
With the hope I shall see
The gift of life he has given me
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God Shed A Tear

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 08:32:36 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

God shed a tear
Down on me

So self-absorbed was I
Full of need and greed
What's in it for me

Ignoring what I was given
In search of more
Looking for yet another
Big score

It was all about me
No one else you see
My heart full of desire
For what I should receive

Yes God shed a tear
Down on me
With the hope I shall see
The gift of life he has given me

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Re: God Shed A Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 09:33:13 PM AEST
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what a beautiful gift this poem is james. your vulnerability is endearing as is this write.

Re: God Shed A Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 31st March 2015 @ 01:07:58 PM AEST
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truly beautiful,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: God Shed A Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Monday, 13th April 2015 @ 08:33:29 AM AEST
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Hi there

What a write bear truth and acquisition of wisdom finally. It's so wonderful when people come to realize that God is there and that God loves them. TFS. God bless

Greetings
Rus

Re: God Shed A Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 9th July 2015 @ 06:30:26 PM AEST
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There is a simple and pure resolve in your poems that comforts and draws the reader in, almost like a hug.

Re: God Shed A Tear (User Rating: 1 )
by poet17 on Sunday, 16th August 2015 @ 02:03:51 PM AEST
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So beautiful and encouraging. Thank you for sharing. Needed that right now.

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