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[title] => loosing your soulmate to death
[time] => 2015-03-27 14:16:10
[hometext] => in grateful thanks to russel who with his last posted poem unknowingly inspired me to write again
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recently i read a poem
remembering how my mind did roam
and felt each drop of blood within
burn inside my lonely veins
i was in shock and disbelief
my love was dead and so was i
i wanted to be the one that had died
my voice was lost my eyes only cried
i breathed; slowly, slowly, so bereft
i reached out to my children
they were all of him left
my heart remains broken
i wish to turn back time
i see him in their eyes, smiles and ways
through it all i am lonely most days
i wait to die to be one with him again
poetry saved of me, any soul that remains
i have known such love returned and true
he leaves of death, i, the other, remains blue
as in life i know his thoughts, values, dreams
he knew me like no other ever will it seems
remainder of life this living one- feeling the lost one
right beside me, in heart, yet out of reach,
still i feel the burning loss, in soul and mind
life is not kind
[comments] => 12
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[informant] => ladyfawn
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loosing your soulmate to death
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 02:16:10 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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recently i read a poem
remembering how my mind did roam
and felt each drop of blood within
burn inside my lonely veins
i was in shock and disbelief
my love was dead and so was i
i wanted to be the one that had died
my voice was lost my eyes only cried
i breathed; slowly, slowly, so bereft
i reached out to my children
they were all of him left
my heart remains broken
i wish to turn back time
i see him in their eyes, smiles and ways
through it all i am lonely most days
i wait to die to be one with him again
poetry saved of me, any soul that remains
i have known such love returned and true
he leaves of death, i, the other, remains blue
as in life i know his thoughts, values, dreams
he knew me like no other ever will it seems
remainder of life this living one- feeling the lost one
right beside me, in heart, yet out of reach,
still i feel the burning loss, in soul and mind
life is not kind
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ladyfawn
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2015-03-27 14:16:10]
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by softerware on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 04:33:33 PM AEST
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There is great quiet strength in women. We cannot leave our children to raise themselves. This doesn't mean we do not suffer; but we survive; inspire, and rise above ourselves.
Women live for their children when everything else is gone…
Your lovely poem begs the question: what do men fight to live for?
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 08:34:25 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. There is just such depth in emotions, such pain - to me, it all seems to be portrayed so exquisitely and yet so honestly. |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 09:16:20 AM AEST
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Dear Nessa
I'm truly sorry for your loss. I do agree with Soft woman are very strong however disagree that all men don't live for anything. Your poem is beautiful it speaks of a grate grate love a rare and beautiful thing. Live peacefully you love waits for you patiently he knows you have much to do. May God walk with you and Bless you always.
Greetings
Rus
PS: Soft I'm not mad at you I just disagree God bless |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 01:47:40 PM AEST
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Brilliant but sad!
God bless you! |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by irisblue on
Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 08:07:23 PM AEST
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| Nessa, how honest and touching this poem is. such a beautiful poem about your soul mate. I agree, poetry is very therapeutic. big huggs. |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by xHeathenx on
Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 07:27:02 AM AEST
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If I didn't offer I'd find myself selfish, and so I offer to you, hugs and love. Not only that, but because we all deserve those two things, you just as much as anybody, and more for your kindness towards others in your taking part in this site's community. :)
I know not this level of pain,
I just may never too
It's quite difficult to wrap
Inside a youthful brain
But I wish to believe,
I wish to be the ever-present hands,
The comforting night-light in a darkened world,
That just ever so slightly exposes the good you grieve
I can't speak from experience
Nor evidence or theory
My life is the likes of hypotheticals
Innumerable memories on clearance
Cheap cost to make and keep
And thus often forgot when I go to sleep
But many more have shaped who I am for sure
This when it comes to lost love, I much prefer
My fears that I know
My concerns and worries,
Much like the people I love,
I have a hard time holding on, but they're easy to let go |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by Lydthon15 on
Wednesday, 1st April 2015 @ 10:38:50 PM AEST
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| A beautiful, haunting poem. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by Beyfoxman5 on
Sunday, 5th April 2015 @ 11:13:02 AM AEST
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This tears me up. An so, I will read it again.
Best,
FOX |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 29th May 2015 @ 09:41:20 AM AEST
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Another poem missed! Glad I checked. Sad to read, but luckily you are blessed with the ability to express your feelings via writing. Also that you have the love of children to carry you through your days. Hug them tight and enjoy those many glimpses of your soul mate.
~Scorp |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th June 2015 @ 10:58:00 AM AEST
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| Ness Darling, this has moved me to tears.. But over the many years we have known each other, you have certainly showed your strength and determination... You have also been a wonderful inspiration to many of us on here... Hugs and woofies my friend.. Love ya!! |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by Archie on
Monday, 7th September 2015 @ 11:30:06 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. Loss leaves an empty place in our hearts that cannot be filled by anything or anyone but the one whose empty place remains. |
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Re: loosing your soulmate to death
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by Flex4life13 on
Monday, 2nd November 2015 @ 06:25:35 PM AEST
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The fact that you can write such a beauty and truly move people solidifies the fact that you are meant to have many many many wondrously happy years on this planet if not solely for yourself yet merely to make us feel.
-As always a gem, Lenny. |
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