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Inside Is A Storm

Contributed by waynster on Wednesday, 25th March 2015 @ 08:09:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops





Looking into your eyes
Is like looking into the eye of a storm
I know something is going on inside
there is something that is not the norm

Wild like the winds of a hurricane
destructive like a tornado's path
Everything shows in your look
to beware of your wrath

You’re a person not to be messed with
your feelings cooled by ice
You listen to a dark soul
that gives you bad advice

Not aware of your surroundings
or your interactions in any way
People usually don’t get close enough
for you to truly hear what they say

The only reason I am close enough
to see what is going on with you
Is because we are close friends
your barriers, you let me through

Please listen
to the words I want to say
Stop listening to your soul
let the hatred go away

I am your friend
and forever will be
So release that storm
allowing a hug from me

Behind your barriers
there is a world of love that’s true
Let your soul be dormant
and your feelings and actions be controlled by you



Written on 25 March 2015
Copyright © 2015 E. Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
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Copyright © waynster ... [ 2015-03-25 08:09:41]
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Re: Inside Is A Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 26th March 2015 @ 05:35:09 PM AEST
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Wayne: I wish we could all have a friend like you describe here. Wise, comforting, tolerant, hopeful, and gracious.
Your poem describes a spirit guide who seeks with permission to lead the way out of bitterness to the healing grace of self-love.
Very strong message from a lion hearted friend.
I hope your gift is accepted, but more, I hope that your keep offering it all your life. We so need your inspiration and faith in others.
softerware


Re: Inside Is A Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 03:47:00 PM AEST
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images and the beauty of friendship, so vividly penned,

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Inside Is A Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Pogivic on Saturday, 28th March 2015 @ 11:47:32 PM AEST
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You do write good rhyming poetry and I like how this one makes me think of the way some people surround themselves with walls that are so hard to reach through. Sometimes I think we all need to be careful not to let those walls get so high that friends are shut out forever. I know people who care are one of life's greatest treasures.


Re: Inside Is A Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Sunday, 29th March 2015 @ 07:50:29 AM AEST
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as usual another great write thanks for sharing




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