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Rewind that
Contributed by
FindingMyself
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Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 09:51:19 PM in AEST
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Rewind that...
Back to when we were happy
Back to problems we had were solved
We rose above because of the love
But poof it's gone
That sisterly love we've had for some time is no more...
My dearest and best friend forever in the whole wide world is going...
Rewind that back a year
We were there for each other no matter the time of the day
But why must you be that way?
Drifting away will never take the pain away...
Rewind that
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Re: Rewind that
(User Rating: 1 ) by Waynster on
Wednesday, 25th March 2015 @ 01:00:51 PM AEST (User
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Once again, another good write, but somehow the flow of your poems are disoriented some how. I think you're talented and can really make your poetry shine. keep on writing, I like reading it.
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