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I want to be with you; but I wont come

I want to talk; but I wont call

I want to hold you; but I'm letting go

if you find someone else; I hope that someone else is me

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AT A DISTANCE

Contributed by mathieu on Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 07:44:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

AT A DISTANCE

I want to be with you; but I wont come

I want to talk; but I wont call

I want to hold you; but I'm letting go

if you find someone else; I hope that someone else is me

because my past; HAS PAST, in our future you shall see

Copyright © mathieu ... [ 2015-03-22 07:44:52]
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Re: AT A DISTANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 02:10:54 PM AEST
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bright, hopeful and beautifully penned:)

hugs n' love nessa

Re: AT A DISTANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 02:24:39 PM AEST
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very nice. by the way your poems are wonderful. I have never read a poem that sucked. every poem is unique from the poets heart that's why I love poetry. don't forget to read and comment on other poets work on here.

Re: AT A DISTANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticmercury on Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 03:06:06 PM AEST
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spoke to me! elegant.

Re: AT A DISTANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Sunday, 22nd March 2015 @ 06:41:38 PM AEST
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This seems to be a paradox now that you mention it. The ever longing and ever hopeful idea to be together, despite the effort being the opposite of what it should be. Letting go while hoping the once-held grasp is what keeps them to you now and later.

Good write. :)

Re: AT A DISTANCE (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Monday, 23rd March 2015 @ 03:31:40 AM AEST
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By no means does your poem suck! I see people write stuff on here all the time and some of it is not even poetry or just makes no sense. Sometimes I am very frank and other times I just don't have the heart to tell someone what they have written is not even poetry. What you have written is poetry and you wrote it quite well! Keep up your writing as us poets love to read the work of other great minds as well.

Wayne

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