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Haunted by old demons and new
Trying to escape the loneliness
Can't stop thinking of you

Strolling over the path of a lost mind
My love for you is breaking me
Trying to find a way out, but I'm blind
I shall never be free

Walking on memory lane
Can't seem to go through
My life will never be the same
Without you

Crawling through the woods of vulnerability
No way out of this bitter landscape
Because the emptiness is inside me
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No Escape

Contributed by FireStarter on Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 04:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Wandering through the valley of emptiness
Haunted by old demons and new
Trying to escape the loneliness
Can't stop thinking of you

Strolling over the path of a lost mind
My love for you is breaking me
Trying to find a way out, but I'm blind
I shall never be free

Walking on memory lane
Can't seem to go through
My life will never be the same
Without you

Crawling through the woods of vulnerability
No way out of this bitter landscape
Because the emptiness is inside me
There is no escape

Copyright © FireStarter ... [ 2015-03-18 16:49:09]
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Re: No Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 05:02:16 PM AEST
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I really love this poem! This is awesome! Every word creates a description that flaunts excitement within the mind of the reader. You did an awesome job of grasping any readers attention! Great write, Keep it up!

Wayne

Re: No Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 05:23:41 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, bittersweet the memory of one gone,
we must breathe and step one bit at a time,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: No Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 01:21:36 AM AEST
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Loved everything about this flow,
well done.

Re: No Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 02:39:36 AM AEST
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Awesome.
blessings,
emy

Re: No Escape (User Rating: 1 )
by blknwht on Friday, 14th August 2015 @ 06:29:05 PM AEST
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I can directly connect to this poem... i've read a few of yours and we aren't in the same boat.. but pretty close...

I'm hoping the pain goes away.... ill keep writing til that day...

thanks for sharing.. great write

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