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~~^~~


Sitting there, chatting late at night,
Wishing they could spend more time together,
Like hours, even days,
sitting on a nearby beach, listening to the tides roll in and the birds sing.
and the full moon rising as the sun sets in the horizon.
Listening to each other’s heartbeat,
each heaving sighs of contentment.
fingers entwined with the others as they gaze eye to eye.........
noses barely brushing.....
lips an inch apart.......
Breaths coming quicker now.....
tension soaring
anticipation high..
lips touching,
the electricity flowing,
the joining is soft, yet hot and unique...
Both shivering at the touch....both wanting each other so much
Slowly undressing each other as their eyes caress the other’s body.....

They continue staring at each other longingly,
Knowing that the reactions to the touch would be unstoppable.
She peels away her eyes from his gorgeous body
Long enough to look into his eyes and smile.
She leans over to him and whispers,
‘I love you, my friend,
But we both know this is wrong.’
With these words, she runs off down to the water’s edge
Hoping he’d follow her.
Hoping he’d say that it wasn’t
But knowing in her heart it was.
She takes a plunge into the cool water,
Knowing that is the only plunge she will take.

He follows her into the water,
Again taking her hands in his,.
This time he whispers to her,
‘It’s ok, my love,
We don’t need to go there.
The love we have for each other goes deeper then that.’
With those words, he kisses her gently on the lips,
Takes her hand, and leads her back to the beach,
Where they get dressed and sit again,
This time she rests her head on his shoulder,
Happy and content just to be with him.
Their wedding day would come soon enough…


~~^~~
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~~ Wishful Thinking~~

Contributed by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 11:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



~~^~~


Sitting there, chatting late at night,
Wishing they could spend more time together,
Like hours, even days,
sitting on a nearby beach, listening to the tides roll in and the birds sing.
and the full moon rising as the sun sets in the horizon.
Listening to each other’s heartbeat,
each heaving sighs of contentment.
fingers entwined with the others as they gaze eye to eye.........
noses barely brushing.....
lips an inch apart.......
Breaths coming quicker now.....
tension soaring
anticipation high..
lips touching,
the electricity flowing,
the joining is soft, yet hot and unique...
Both shivering at the touch....both wanting each other so much
Slowly undressing each other as their eyes caress the other’s body.....

They continue staring at each other longingly,
Knowing that the reactions to the touch would be unstoppable.
She peels away her eyes from his gorgeous body
Long enough to look into his eyes and smile.
She leans over to him and whispers,
‘I love you, my friend,
But we both know this is wrong.’
With these words, she runs off down to the water’s edge
Hoping he’d follow her.
Hoping he’d say that it wasn’t
But knowing in her heart it was.
She takes a plunge into the cool water,
Knowing that is the only plunge she will take.

He follows her into the water,
Again taking her hands in his,.
This time he whispers to her,
‘It’s ok, my love,
We don’t need to go there.
The love we have for each other goes deeper then that.’
With those words, he kisses her gently on the lips,
Takes her hand, and leads her back to the beach,
Where they get dressed and sit again,
This time she rests her head on his shoulder,
Happy and content just to be with him.
Their wedding day would come soon enough…


~~^~~




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Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 11:56:01 PM AEST
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Dreamy and beautiful.

Michelle


Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 12:50:11 AM AEST
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Awesome!!!! Lets add a few wows too!!! Did I say awesome yet? Love it, love it, love it!!!!



Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 02:28:09 PM AEST
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oh so romantic and beautifully penned, a timeless
dreamy totally enjoyable exquisite read!

hugs, woofies n' love nessa

@->>->--


Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 10:10:33 PM AEST
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Wow- fantastic +


Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Friday, 20th March 2015 @ 09:30:51 PM AEST
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wow a very romantic and mystic story. beautifully penned. love this.


Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Monday, 23rd March 2015 @ 03:51:18 AM AEST
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You wrote this exquisitely! You conveyed the lust wanted, but rejected to a more moral pleasure of just wanting to be together and love each other, knowing that special day will eventually come. Awesome job writing this! Thanks for sharing and oh yeah, WOW! Love it too!

Wayne


Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 24th March 2015 @ 02:25:13 AM AEST
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Wow girlfriend,
all your talent shines is this magic, heavenly write.
luv ya,
emy


Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 24th March 2023 @ 06:15:02 AM AEST
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This was really beautiful in an erotic way. You did good with this poem.


Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Durango on Tuesday, 11th April 2023 @ 11:34:38 AM AEST
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The build up and withdraw is intense and keeps moving without lingering on what was already written.
"Happy and content just to be with him" until the wedding day, is a feel good ending.


Re: ~~ Wishful Thinking~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 20th April 2023 @ 12:17:19 AM AEST
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Still wonderful all these years later......................!!!

James




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