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Wish my life away
End the struggles
I go through every single day

I wake up in denial
With the sun my face smiles
By the end of the day
I drop my head in utter dismay

I sit and ponder
There must be a better way
The path to freedom
Alludes me every which kind of way

With much disgust
Void of all trust
My life is unhappy
I'm wishing it away
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Wishing My Life Away

Contributed by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 09:47:59 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I've decided to
Wish my life away
End the struggles
I go through every single day

I wake up in denial
With the sun my face smiles
By the end of the day
I drop my head in utter dismay

I sit and ponder
There must be a better way
The path to freedom
Alludes me every which kind of way

With much disgust
Void of all trust
My life is unhappy
I'm wishing it away

Copyright © JamesStockdale ... [ 2015-03-12 09:47:59]
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Re: Wishing My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Apollonia on Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 01:32:18 PM AEST
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I do not hope that you really do it, you do sound like an awesome person with a lot to offer and a lot on your mind. I as person love such a deep person as you... if you are?

But I can relate to every single word that you have written.

I'm truly very sorry for you, because you deserve to be happy!

Re: Wishing My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 05:22:06 PM AEST
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Day by day we can find ourselves in disappointment
Void of all joy and happiness from our daily struggles
But if you find it in yourself to accept the bad
And cherish the fleeting good completely
You can work to the next episode of satisfaction
And find your own joy in the bad thrown your way
Work at it, for it takes effort
And the bad will be wished away
And you can enjoy to the best, of every day

I hope you feel the best Jim, because our egos are fragile things, but at the same time, with confidence and perseverance, we can overcome our faults. :)

Re: Wishing My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 09:04:32 AM AEST
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poetic talent abound waist not one moment rejoice

Re: Wishing My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 16th March 2015 @ 05:55:20 AM AEST
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honest and heartfelt. beautifully penned, might i add that
what we wish away may go with us sitting wishing our
way back, ~enjoy each moment each day:)

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Wishing My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 18th March 2015 @ 12:21:41 AM AEST
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Good job expressing emotions....
Jenni_K

Re: Wishing My Life Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th September 2020 @ 04:36:29 AM AEST
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//There is nothing wrong with having dreams and wishes. That/'/s my opinion. Change my mind. 😎 Of course I got lectured once for starting a sentence with "I wish." She was a ***** anyway so I ignored it, of course. Now, about wishing your life away. I talked to the magic genie the day you posted this and she said, "Request denied ‼️" Sorry for the late notice but we just can/'/t have any of that around here‼️🤬💜 Stay strong and eat yer spinach 💪🤠‼️

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