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Array ( [sid] => 180745 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => works in progress [time] => 2015-03-11 06:09:10 [hometext] => figured I would share some WIP that will likely never finish [bodytext] => Set fire to your soul,
The heart torn asunder,
Will it become whole,
Or be left to wonder.

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works in progress

Contributed by lonelywolf04 on Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 06:09:10 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Set fire to your soul,
The heart torn asunder,
Will it become whole,
Or be left to wonder.

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Re: works in progress (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 10:04:15 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful start for a poem i believe you should
finish, it also stands on its own as a poem, or makes a
strong stanza, keep writing poet:)

hugs n' love nessa

Re: works in progress (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 12:23:41 PM AEST
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Share your others individually, because this one as strong as it is, is quite moving, and almost seems like it'll be a tough tone and depth to follow. Either way, I definitely like this. :)

Re: works in progress (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 07:57:29 AM AEST
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tis a good start would like to see more..thanks for sharing

Re: works in progress (User Rating: 1 )
by xiaozhengm1 on Thursday, 12th November 2015 @ 09:12:23 PM AEST
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